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各位高手可以帮我看看我写的英语作文有没有语法错误?
作文如下:
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Hello,I am xxx(名字).I am a girl.I am come from China .I am a student.I am in No.8 middle school ,I am in class3 grade 7 .I like astronomy .I think it is very wonderful .My favorite color is blue .oh,that is fish.I like eating them.It isvery delicious.I am going to play with xxx名字 tomorrow .
Hello,I am xxx(名字).I am a girl.I come from China .I am a student.I am in No.8 middle school ,I am in class3 grade 7 .I like astronomy .I think it is very wonderful .My favorite color is blue .oh,that is fish.I like eating them.They are very delicious.I am going to play with xxx名字 tomorrow .
(I come from China 和 I am from China 都可以,但是不能写成 I am come from China
有几处错误已经帮你改好了,
再问: 不需要把倒数第三句 them 改成it吗?
再问: 不需要把倒数第三句 them 改成it吗?
再答: oh, that is fish. I like eating them.这句话改成oh, there is a fish. I like eating fishes.或者oh, there are some fishes. I like eating them. (要用there be 句型,意思是某处有某物)