作业帮 > 英语 > 作业

高手帮我把这句改通顺点.这句语法应该有错...

来源:学生作业帮 编辑:作业帮 分类:英语作业 时间:2024/06/06 14:29:49
高手帮我把这句改通顺点.这句语法应该有错...
Thirdly,the possible reason of the change is that the China’s new generations focus more on entertained consumption ,furthermore,having been influenced by the Chinese concept ‘face’ and Western advance-consumption.读起来特别扭 ==帮我改改吧
Thirdly,the possible reason for the change is that China’s new generations focus more on entertainment consumption .Besides,they have been influenced by the Chinese concept of ‘face’ and Western advance-consumption.
再问: 谢谢你~~能帮我再看看这句么 我觉得worry about那里有问题,,纠结中... if the whole society has consummating social security system, its citizens would not worry about their future, thus, it is usually to spend instead of saving.
再答: 是想要表达“如果这个社会建立起一个完善的社会保障体系,那么它的居民将不需要为自己的未来担忧,所以他们一般都倾向于消费而不是储蓄。” 这个大概意思吗? consummate好像更偏向于“完满”,要不改成perfect吧,有一个比较完美的,完善的体系 if the whole society has a perfect social security system, its citizens would not have to worry about their future, thus, they usually prefer consuming to saving. / they usually prefer to consume rather than save. wound not have to do sth. 将不需要担心将来