谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Resolution》
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谢谢帮我检查一下作文《New Year`s Resolution》
New Year`s Resolution
2007 is over,and 2008 is coming.Of course,I`m going to make some New Year`s Resotutions.In the new year,I`m going to study harder and harder.First I`m going to try to study science better.Because I think my science achievement is very terrible.I have work harder.And I`m going to do exercise more to keep fit and to be taller.Now I`m start playing tennis.I want to play it well.Finally I hope our life becomes more and more happy..I will learn writing with my left hand during the next year
New Year`s Resolution
2007 is over,and 2008 is coming.Of course,I`m going to make some New Year`s Resotutions.In the new year,I`m going to study harder and harder.First I`m going to try to study science better.Because I think my science achievement is very terrible.I have work harder.And I`m going to do exercise more to keep fit and to be taller.Now I`m start playing tennis.I want to play it well.Finally I hope our life becomes more and more happy..I will learn writing with my left hand during the next year
倒数第二句和倒数第一句换一下位置,倒数第二句是总结的句子.Finally就不要动了,改为“ Finally I will learn writing with my left hand during the next year.I hope our lives becomes more and more happily.”.
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划横线的地方是语法错误.(已经帮你改过来了^_^)
另外,缩写符号是“'”,例I'm zdlpt.
整篇文章写得不错,继续努力!\(^o^)/
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划横线的地方是语法错误.(已经帮你改过来了^_^)
另外,缩写符号是“'”,例I'm zdlpt.
整篇文章写得不错,继续努力!\(^o^)/
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