作业帮如果这是一篇英语高考30作文,老师们你们会给多分,并且分析一下,这可是我写了3天的一片作文
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如果这是一篇英语高考30作文,老师们你们会给多分,并且分析一下,这可是我写了3天的一片作文
How to improve English
It is commonly recognized that learning English makes massive students lost heart and they don not know how to deal with it correctly.Here are some ways which may help you.
Firstly,taking the right attitude is extremely important.You must learn it by heart.Do not forget nothing stands in your way.
Secondly,stick to reading and writing every day or you will not solve the problems easily in exam,which may cause you to lost the high marks.
Finally,you might have heard that"A young idlerr,an old beggar".It tells us we should make full use of time as time is swift.I firmly believe that no victory comes out without price and that success belongs to those who make constant efforts and suffer long years of patient toil.
第一段don→do
How to improve English
It is commonly recognized that learning English makes massive students lost heart and they don not know how to deal with it correctly.Here are some ways which may help you.
Firstly,taking the right attitude is extremely important.You must learn it by heart.Do not forget nothing stands in your way.
Secondly,stick to reading and writing every day or you will not solve the problems easily in exam,which may cause you to lost the high marks.
Finally,you might have heard that"A young idlerr,an old beggar".It tells us we should make full use of time as time is swift.I firmly believe that no victory comes out without price and that success belongs to those who make constant efforts and suffer long years of patient toil.
第一段don→do
只知道有些语法错误,像是 lost heart 应该是 lose heart因为前面有 'makes',do not forget 后尾应该加‘that’,to lost the high marks 应该是 to lose high marks
第二段好像没有主语,one should stick to...应该会较好,而且整句有点不通顺
还有一些用词不恰当,像是massive students的massive,‘time is swift’,time passes swiftly会比较恰当
就只能帮到这些了
再问： 那老师给我打打分啊 谢谢啊
再答： 我自认还不够格为你打分，不过你写得已经不错了，继续努力 :)
第二段好像没有主语,one should stick to...应该会较好,而且整句有点不通顺
还有一些用词不恰当,像是massive students的massive,‘time is swift’,time passes swiftly会比较恰当
就只能帮到这些了
再问： 那老师给我打打分啊 谢谢啊
再答： 我自认还不够格为你打分，不过你写得已经不错了，继续努力 :)
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