我写了篇英语作文```希望有人帮帮修改```

我写了篇英语作文```希望有人帮帮修改```
I have a dream
Obama's election itself has changed the world,This is because the world's most powerful country,but slao the country which have had the most painful racial discrimination,meet a black president.the ideal of Martin Luther Dr.Jin 40 years ago "I have a dream" has been realized.If there are still people do not think the dream has came true,then.That is because the shadow of his own heart is so heavy which Stood in his eyes.
His election let us think of whether Our hearts has such a dream And has been the pursuit of that dream
Obama was elected President of the United States ,here we see the significance
This is much greater significance than how the so-called U.S.economy for the next four years and Iraq peoblem
Maybe you dreamed of the disappearance of the gap between urban and rural areas Perhaps he dreamed of every Chinese people have a gentleman-like quality;or Both sides of the strait dream of the Chinese mainland and Taiwan people can live in harmony and War will never happen ......Of course,there are a lot of dreams.But,in fact,what a dream is not important,what is important is that you ,I and he all has a dream.Obama can go all the way to today,beacause he gose all along the former line of the dream of Martin Luther king 40 years ago,without that dream,He can not go anywhere,Not to mention get into the White House .
Believe me,and believe yourself,When we have a dream,when we have the same dream,the dream will come true!

I have a dream
Obama's election itself has changed the world,This is because it is the world's most powerful country,but also the country which have had the most painful racial discrimination,meet a black president.The ideal of Martin Luther Dr.Jin said 40 years ago "I have a dream" has been realized.If there are still people do not think the dream has come true,then.That is because the shadow of his own heart is so heavy which Stood in his eyes.
His election let us think of whether Our hearts has such a dream And has been the pursuit of that dream
Obama was elected President of the United States ,here we see the significance
This is much greater significance than how the so-called U.S.economy for the next four years and Iraq problem
Maybe you dreamed of the disappearance of the gap between urban and rural areas Perhaps he dreamed of every Chinese people have a gentleman-like quality; or Both sides of the strait dream of the Chinese mainland and Taiwan people can live in harmony and the war will never happen ......Of course,there are a lot of dreams.But,in fact,what a dream is not important,the important is you,he and I both has a dream.Obama can go all the way to today,because he goes all along the former line of the dream of Martin Luther king 40 years ago,without that dream,He can not go anywhere,Not to mention get into the White House .
Believe me,and believe yourself,when we have a dream,when we have the same dream,the dream will come true!
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