有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~

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有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~
看看语法有没有什么错误之类了,先谢过了
First I want to tell you ,we can learn together.I feel very happy.As you can see ,I was a transfer student.Although I fail in my senior entrance examination.But this did not bring me down,I'm not a loser.
My teacher once said to me:'when you have choices,choose the best.when you have no choices,do your best.'
I have to do the best.
Well,hark back to the subject.
I'm a outgoing girl.I love all the things I like.My favorite color is green.Because it represents new.Also,I love music,especially country music,so I like Taylor Swift very much.
Finally,I want say,I can lose suffer a big.But I will stage a comeback.
Hope we can get alone happy.
Thank you for listening to my self introduction.

First I want to tell you ,that we can learn together I feel very happy.As you can see ,I was a transfer student.Although I failed(因为是过去式) in my senior entrance examination,but it（代指failure） did not bring me down,I'm not a loser.
My teacher once told me:'when you have choices,choose the best.When you have no choices,do your best.'（顺便提一句,我喜欢你们老师这句话!）
So I have to do my best.
Well,let's hark back to the topic.
I'm an outgoing girl.I love all the things I like.（我总觉得“我爱所有我喜欢的东西”,这句话是废话.不过你喜欢的话也可以加上）My favorite color is green.Because it represents new and flesh.Also,I love music,especially country music,so I like Taylor Swift very much.
Finally,I want to say,I can bear to suffer a big failure.But I will stage a comeback in the end.( 东山再起~我喜欢)
Hope we can get alone happy.
Thank you for listening to my self introduction.

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