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这篇是我的关于spain的发表文章,帮我修改下吧,把一些复杂的句子改得简单些 容易表达些,如果能在中间加上一些连接词 语气词的话就太感谢了 比如加一些for example.I think 之类的词(^o^）
Etiquette & Customs in Spain
Meeting Etiquette
.When introduced expect to shake hands.
.Once a relationship is established,men may embrace and pat each other on the shoulder.
.Female friends kiss each other on both cheeks,starting with the left.
Table manners
.Remain standing until invited to sit down.You may be shown to a particular seat.
.Do not begin eating until the hostess starts.
.Use utensils to eat most food.Even fruit is eaten with a knife and fork.
.The host gives the first toast.
Religion in Spain
Spain is more or less a Christian nation wherein around 76 percent of the population is part of the Catholic Church,and about 3 percent belongs to the Islam Churc,while only 2 percent belongs to the Protestant Church.non-believers or atheists are about 19 percent of the population,However,there is a good mix of other religions like Islam as well.
Catholic Church：about 76 percent of the population
Islam Churc:about 3% of the total population
Protestant Church:only 2 percent of the population
non-believers or atheists:about 19 percent of the population
Festival in spain
Los sanfermines(奔牛节)
The Sanfermin festival – los sanfermines in spanish - which takes place every year from 6th-14th july in pamplona,the capital of navarra,has made the city famous throughout the world for what is its most well-known event
LA Tomatina（番茄节）
La Tomatina is a food fight festival held on the last Wednesday of August each year in the town of Buñol in the valencia region of Spain.Tens of metric tons of over-ripe tomatoes are thrown in the streets in exactly one hour.
Tourism in spain
Spain is a country of large geographical and cultural diversity,often a surprise for tourists who are expecting to find a country mostly known for beach tourism.Travel to Spain and you will find everything,from lush meadows,green valleys,hills and snowy mountains in the Northern regions to almost desert zones in the South.Its beaches are also famous and worth visiting,small and charming creeks in the North and wide white sand beaches on the South and Western parts of the country,without forgetting the exotic black sand beaches of the volcanic Canary Islands.
修改好以后也可以发到我的邮箱dingshunbin@hotmali.com(^o^)
这篇是我的关于spain的发表文章,帮我修改下吧,把一些复杂的句子改得简单些 容易表达些,如果能在中间加上一些连接词 语气词的话就太感谢了 比如加一些for example.I think 之类的词(^o^）
Etiquette & Customs in Spain
Meeting Etiquette
.When introduced expect to shake hands.
.Once a relationship is established,men may embrace and pat each other on the shoulder.
.Female friends kiss each other on both cheeks,starting with the left.
Table manners
.Remain standing until invited to sit down.You may be shown to a particular seat.
.Do not begin eating until the hostess starts.
.Use utensils to eat most food.Even fruit is eaten with a knife and fork.
.The host gives the first toast.
Religion in Spain
Spain is more or less a Christian nation wherein around 76 percent of the population is part of the Catholic Church,and about 3 percent belongs to the Islam Churc,while only 2 percent belongs to the Protestant Church.non-believers or atheists are about 19 percent of the population,However,there is a good mix of other religions like Islam as well.
Catholic Church：about 76 percent of the population
Islam Churc:about 3% of the total population
Protestant Church:only 2 percent of the population
non-believers or atheists:about 19 percent of the population
Festival in spain
Los sanfermines(奔牛节)
The Sanfermin festival – los sanfermines in spanish - which takes place every year from 6th-14th july in pamplona,the capital of navarra,has made the city famous throughout the world for what is its most well-known event
LA Tomatina（番茄节）
La Tomatina is a food fight festival held on the last Wednesday of August each year in the town of Buñol in the valencia region of Spain.Tens of metric tons of over-ripe tomatoes are thrown in the streets in exactly one hour.
Tourism in spain
Spain is a country of large geographical and cultural diversity,often a surprise for tourists who are expecting to find a country mostly known for beach tourism.Travel to Spain and you will find everything,from lush meadows,green valleys,hills and snowy mountains in the Northern regions to almost desert zones in the South.Its beaches are also famous and worth visiting,small and charming creeks in the North and wide white sand beaches on the South and Western parts of the country,without forgetting the exotic black sand beaches of the volcanic Canary Islands.
修改好以后也可以发到我的邮箱dingshunbin@hotmali.com(^o^)
"Intellectual Property Protection in China 2009" white paper released.White paper,Copyright 2009,departments at all levels to strengthen our influence throughout the enterprise and Internet sites to actively monitor and effectively combat network television,network literature,online games and other areas of piracy.Infringement cases throughout the investigation and handling of network 541,closed 362 illegal websites,Jimmy choo,a fine of 128 million yuan,the confiscation of the server 154 sets of 24 cases transferred to judicial authorities in connection constitute a major criminal cases.
According to the National Copyright Administration Copyright Management Department officials,Xu Chao,at present,Yves saint Laurent,the Internet piracy problem,more important reason is the relatively fast development of network technology,Ugg Boots Discount,while the response to keep up.According to statistics,Ugg Bailey Button,in 2009 China's total annual software to register 70,900,up 49.75 percent; which software copyright registrations 67,900,an increase of 48.6%.Xu Chao said that for the Internet copyright protection,the judicial relief in China and administrative relief,many people are right to defend their rights through legal channels.2009 copyright case in courts throughout the country received 15 302 new,up 39.73 percent over the previous year,while the total network infringement of copyright disputes in courts for more than half.
According to the National Copyright Administration Copyright Management Department officials,Xu Chao,at present,Yves saint Laurent,the Internet piracy problem,more important reason is the relatively fast development of network technology,Ugg Boots Discount,while the response to keep up.According to statistics,Ugg Bailey Button,in 2009 China's total annual software to register 70,900,up 49.75 percent; which software copyright registrations 67,900,an increase of 48.6%.Xu Chao said that for the Internet copyright protection,the judicial relief in China and administrative relief,many people are right to defend their rights through legal channels.2009 copyright case in courts throughout the country received 15 302 new,up 39.73 percent over the previous year,while the total network infringement of copyright disputes in courts for more than half.