作业帮英语高手请检查语法错误
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英语高手请检查语法错误
Youth
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Good morning!I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech.Today my topic is “youth”.I hope you will like it.
First,I want to ask you some questions:1.Do you know what is youth?
2.How do you master your youth?
Youth is not a time of life,it is a state of mind; it is not rosy cheeks,red lips and supple knees,it is a matter of the emotions.It is the freshness,it is freshness of the deep spring of life.
Saying goodbye to childhood,we step into another important time in the pace of young,facing new situations,dealing with different problems.
Experenced the sour,sweet,litter and salty.Can you really became of person of significance.The time of young is limited.It may pass by without your attention ,and when you discover what has happened,it is always too late.Grasping the young well means a better time is waisting for you in the near future,or the situation may be opposite.
Having a view on these great men in the history of human beings,they all made full use of their youth time,to do things that are useful to society,to the whole mankind.And as a cosquence they are remembered by later.
The young is just like blooming flowers,they are so beautiful when blooming.They make people feel happy,but with time passing by,after they withers,most people think they are ugly.And so it is the same with the young.We are enthusiastic when we are young.
Then we may lose our passing when getting older and older.So we must treasure it.Don’t let the limited time pass by.Leaving nothing of significane.
The sixtieth birthday of our motherland is coming.
As a senior middle school student.We are living during our best time in our life.We should work harder and harder.We should master more knowledge and more skills.We are the future of our motherland.We must use our youth to make our motherland’s tomorrow more and more beautiful.Thank you.
Youth
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Good morning!I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech.Today my topic is “youth”.I hope you will like it.
First,I want to ask you some questions:1.Do you know what is youth?
2.How do you master your youth?
Youth is not a time of life,it is a state of mind; it is not rosy cheeks,red lips and supple knees,it is a matter of the emotions.It is the freshness,it is freshness of the deep spring of life.
Saying goodbye to childhood,we step into another important time in the pace of young,facing new situations,dealing with different problems.
Experenced the sour,sweet,litter and salty.Can you really became of person of significance.The time of young is limited.It may pass by without your attention ,and when you discover what has happened,it is always too late.Grasping the young well means a better time is waisting for you in the near future,or the situation may be opposite.
Having a view on these great men in the history of human beings,they all made full use of their youth time,to do things that are useful to society,to the whole mankind.And as a cosquence they are remembered by later.
The young is just like blooming flowers,they are so beautiful when blooming.They make people feel happy,but with time passing by,after they withers,most people think they are ugly.And so it is the same with the young.We are enthusiastic when we are young.
Then we may lose our passing when getting older and older.So we must treasure it.Don’t let the limited time pass by.Leaving nothing of significane.
The sixtieth birthday of our motherland is coming.
As a senior middle school student.We are living during our best time in our life.We should work harder and harder.We should master more knowledge and more skills.We are the future of our motherland.We must use our youth to make our motherland’s tomorrow more and more beautiful.Thank you.
1.my topic 应该是the topic of mine这个是惯用通病
2.It may pass by without your attention我个人认为不应该有 by 不是经过,而只是时间的消逝,用pass 你后面的都是这样用的
3.Grasping the young well means a better time is waisting for you in the near future,我觉得不是young 而应该是youth名词 你说的那个是青年人,而不是青春
4.they all made full use of their youth time,后面不用加time吧或者是yong time.
5.Then we may lose our passing when getting older and older中的passing 是不是应该是passion猜测你是笔误
6.We should work harder and harder.We should master more knowledge and more skills.改成
We should work harder and harder to master more knowledge and more skills.你觉得怎么样,尽量减少用第一人称做主语的句子毫无关联词地重叠在一起.
其实我还觉得,应该在你引用的那段前面加上一个承上启下的句子,比如说,what is the youth.更好些然后在How do you master your youth?的前面再加个连接句,你的连接太硬了,就主题部鲜明了啊
2.It may pass by without your attention我个人认为不应该有 by 不是经过,而只是时间的消逝,用pass 你后面的都是这样用的
3.Grasping the young well means a better time is waisting for you in the near future,我觉得不是young 而应该是youth名词 你说的那个是青年人,而不是青春
4.they all made full use of their youth time,后面不用加time吧或者是yong time.
5.Then we may lose our passing when getting older and older中的passing 是不是应该是passion猜测你是笔误
6.We should work harder and harder.We should master more knowledge and more skills.改成
We should work harder and harder to master more knowledge and more skills.你觉得怎么样,尽量减少用第一人称做主语的句子毫无关联词地重叠在一起.
其实我还觉得,应该在你引用的那段前面加上一个承上启下的句子,比如说,what is the youth.更好些然后在How do you master your youth?的前面再加个连接句,你的连接太硬了,就主题部鲜明了啊