作业帮英语作文(作文评改)
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Scott works very long ours. He usually get up at 17:00.He brushes his teeth and has a shower .Then he eats his breakfast . What a funny time to bteakfast. After breakfast he plsys his guitar.To goes to work he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel.The bus usually take him to work at 18:00.People love listen to him.He usually get to home at 17:oo.He watches TV and he goes to bed at 22;00.Can you think what is his job.
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Scott works very long hours. He usually gets up at 17:00.He brushes his teeth and has a shower .Then he eats his breakfast . What a funny time to have breakfast. After breakfast he plays the guitar.To go to work he takes the number 17 bus to the hotel.The bus usually takes him to work at 18:00.People love to listen to him.He usually gets ( to去掉，因为home是副词，副词前面介词要省略。） home at 17:00（根据上下文，这个时间安排似乎不合理，因为前面是18：00去上班，所以请检查一下）.He watches TV and he goes to bed at 22：00.Can you think what his job is？（此句是宾语从句，从句部分要用陈述语序，所以把is放在后面。） .
优点：行文流畅，内容完整，词汇运用合理。
不足：关于动词的恰当使用要强化。
最终答案：略
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Scott works very long hours. He usually gets up at 17:00.He brushes his teeth and has a shower .Then he eats his breakfast . What a funny time to have breakfast. After breakfast he plays the guitar.To go to work he takes the number 17 bus to the hotel.The bus usually takes him to work at 18:00.People love to listen to him.He usually gets ( to去掉，因为home是副词，副词前面介词要省略。） home at 17:00（根据上下文，这个时间安排似乎不合理，因为前面是18：00去上班，所以请检查一下）.He watches TV and he goes to bed at 22：00.Can you think what his job is？（此句是宾语从句，从句部分要用陈述语序，所以把is放在后面。） .
优点：行文流畅，内容完整，词汇运用合理。
不足：关于动词的恰当使用要强化。
最终答案：略