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his success came from his insistent,he teaches me the succes

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his success came from his insistent,he teaches me the success is that insist on the dream.
这句话有什么语法错误吗?
有.
一、insistent是形容词,不能放在物主代词后面;
二、me后面是宾语从句,宾语从句中的success是抽象名词,不要加the;
三、is后面如果用了that,则后面是一个表语从句,但这个表语从句没有主语.
改动法:
一、insistent改为insistence;
二、去掉the;
三、把错误的表语从句改成动词不定式短语.
改动后的句子为:
His success came from his insistence,he teaches me that success is to insist on the dream.