作业帮帮我看看这篇自我介绍有什么问题
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帮我看看这篇自我介绍有什么问题
Hello,my name is XXX.You can call me Jason.I am 12 yeas old.I graduated from Yongxing primary school .I'm a curious person,and I like learning new things.I am helpful.My classmates are very admire me.I have many hobbies,such as:running,playing chess,skipping and a lot.I have a big dream,please don't laugh at me,I want to be a world first boss when I grow up.Because now Chinese not what famous brand.I came to Jingtai Middle school today,because I really like this school,I want to work today,but I to come to Jingtai middle school and give up the lessons,hope I can enter this good middle school.That's all,thank you!
明天就要去中学面试了,有问题的话帮我修改一下.
Hello,my name is XXX.You can call me Jason.I am 12 yeas old.I graduated from Yongxing primary school .I'm a curious person,and I like learning new things.I am helpful.My classmates are very admire me.I have many hobbies,such as:running,playing chess,skipping and a lot.I have a big dream,please don't laugh at me,I want to be a world first boss when I grow up.Because now Chinese not what famous brand.I came to Jingtai Middle school today,because I really like this school,I want to work today,but I to come to Jingtai middle school and give up the lessons,hope I can enter this good middle school.That's all,thank you!
明天就要去中学面试了,有问题的话帮我修改一下.
My classmates are very admire me.感觉很变扭,建议改成,.I get the respect from my classmates.
, such as: running, playing chess,skipping and a lot.,改成,and so on .
I want to be a world first boss when I grow up.改成,I want to be a first boss in the world when I grow up.
Because now Chinese not what famous brand完全语法错误,我理解为 Because Chinese have not a famous brand now.
.I came to Jingtai Middle school today,改成.I have went to Jingtai Middle school today,
以下句子语法错误不理解什么意思.I want to work today, but I to come to Jingtai middle school and give up the lessons, hope I can enter this good middle school.
望采纳~~~
, such as: running, playing chess,skipping and a lot.,改成,and so on .
I want to be a world first boss when I grow up.改成,I want to be a first boss in the world when I grow up.
Because now Chinese not what famous brand完全语法错误,我理解为 Because Chinese have not a famous brand now.
.I came to Jingtai Middle school today,改成.I have went to Jingtai Middle school today,
以下句子语法错误不理解什么意思.I want to work today, but I to come to Jingtai middle school and give up the lessons, hope I can enter this good middle school.
望采纳~~~