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学校计划举行英语作文竞赛，主题为We Need advice from older generations 请根据下列要求写一篇作文 你遇到了困难或问题 不知该怎么办 你去请教一位长辈，后来问题得到了解决 要求写清楚下面三点 1 当时面临的困难或问题是什么 2 你获得的指教是什么 3 结果如何 我的作文 we need advice from older generations I have many problems in my life.Every time Iget into trouble,I must ask for help to that older generation. Last week,I asked for my friend teaching me English after class.At that day,my teacher gave me a task that clean the classroom after class.I had to do as what my teacher said.At last,the friend of mine was sitting in the bitter wind for about two hours.After that, I didn't know how to explain.With the problem,I visited my grandpa's home to find the way to deal with it. After being told that thing,my grandpa smiled and told me that you just tell him what you told me just now.I believed my grandpa and I tole him that thing.He forgave me. Now, we are the closest friends. my grandpa is that older ganeration. I believe him and he always give me guidance on how to deal with problems. 再帮我评下分吧 我们这边满分25
解题思路： 书面表达先要确定人称，时态，之后检查要点是否齐全，语言是否流畅。
解题过程：
文章总体写得不错，符合题目要求，注意一下句型和短语的表达和一些过渡词的增补就好了。加油！ 修改过的书面表达在附件，请查收。如有 异议，欢迎来信讨论！希望你满意。祝你学习进步！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
文章总体写得不错，符合题目要求，注意一下句型和短语的表达和一些过渡词的增补就好了。加油！ 修改过的书面表达在附件，请查收。如有 异议，欢迎来信讨论！希望你满意。祝你学习进步！
最终答案：略