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求短文纠错.下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.Dear Meng.First I need clear up a

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求短文纠错.
下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.
Dear Meng.
First I need clear up about i like you this thing.Listening,That's only like!Not love,I admit that I had like you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompany my life-long,So I won't have a aurtship easily.
Second,what i like is your shy,but you changed now,didn't give my feeling before.
Finally ,I'll tell you sense of love,If i'm in love,That girl must be my wife,and never change,It's only a girl in my life,Thanks for your love,If you love my enough,I hope you can wait for me.
yours.
总感觉很多地方不连贯不像是句子.
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Dear Meng,
Firstly I need to clear up about the truth that I like you.Please pay attention that I just like instead of loving.I admit that I have liked you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompany me life-long,So I won't have a aurtship easily.
Secondly,what i like is your shyness,but you have changed now so that I don't have the affection anymore.
Finally ,I'll tell you the sense of love.If i'm in love,the girl must be my wife in the future.There should be only a girl in my life.Thanks for your love.If you love me enough,I hope you can wait for me.
yours.