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Heavy smog in china
At the end of 2013, a heavy smog came in cold winter and nearly 25 provinces were covered with the smog so that people’s regular life was disturbed.
The cause of smog is pollution. Many factories produce too much smog but don’t cope with it, putting it out into the air directly. With the bad phenomenon happening again and again, the air becomes darker and darker ,the smog turns to be heavier and heavier.
So the problem that how to protect the environment in a harmonious way is presented to public. In a traditional way, we should ban those factories that make much pollution not to make great smog. Facing with the heavy smog, we should use something that can cover our mouths. Besides, we shouldn’t go outside frequently to breath in less smog or ash.
Aiming at the heavy smog in china, we should protect our environment shoulder to shoulder in purpose of making a cozier world to live in!