作业帮帮我修改一下这篇作文,英语作文.
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帮我修改一下这篇作文,英语作文.
My favorite hobby is music.There are plenty of music files in my computer.I stored them in different folders and personalised the folders with different names.For example,Jazz,LadyGAGA,Symphony,and so on.
Music plays a positive role in my everyday life.When I felt unhappy,I can chat with my friend or just going around while the perfect way is turning on the Mp3!Music would cheer me up again!
All in all,I love music,and I can't live without music!
My favorite hobby is music.There are plenty of music files in my computer.I stored them in different folders and personalised the folders with different names.For example,Jazz,LadyGAGA,Symphony,and so on.
Music plays a positive role in my everyday life.When I felt unhappy,I can chat with my friend or just going around while the perfect way is turning on the Mp3!Music would cheer me up again!
All in all,I love music,and I can't live without music!
My favorite hobby is listening to music.( what i loved most is music.)There are plenty of music files in my computer.I stored them in different folders and personalised the folders with different names.For example,Jazz,LadyGAGA,Symphony,and so on.
Music plays a positive role in my everyday life.When I felt upset（沮丧）,I can chat with my friends（复数比较好） or just go (go 和chat是并列的,都在can后,都用原型） around while the perfect way is turning on the Mp3（这句话没看懂,你想表达什么呢?如果你想说听着音乐走走可以说,or just go around with the music encouraging me)!Music always( always 比would要好一些,它表状态,和持续性） cheer me up !
All in all,I love music and（and这里前面无需加逗号） I can't live without it（前面刚提过music,避免重复,用it）!
Music plays a positive role in my everyday life.When I felt upset（沮丧）,I can chat with my friends（复数比较好） or just go (go 和chat是并列的,都在can后,都用原型） around while the perfect way is turning on the Mp3（这句话没看懂,你想表达什么呢?如果你想说听着音乐走走可以说,or just go around with the music encouraging me)!Music always( always 比would要好一些,它表状态,和持续性） cheer me up !
All in all,I love music and（and这里前面无需加逗号） I can't live without it（前面刚提过music,避免重复,用it）!