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求英文高手看看我翻译的对不对
每一款都是艺术品.Every item is an art.lans的设计秉承了简洁,复古,大气,自然的设计风格.推崇个性,追求品位,以协调的皮色和明快的线条体现"不凡".实现个性突破的同时保留原皮风貌,让您切身体验皮具带给你的自然感受,回归人类对皮具原始的欲望.The design of Lans, focus on simple,classic ancient,generous,natural style. Pursue on personality, taste, all extraordinary from harmonious color and sprightly lines.keeping original leather meanwhile has the character breakthrough, giving you the most experience of nature from the leather made.volvering people’s desire to the leatherware. 用心缝制,diligent tailor-job制作工艺,craftsmanship设计风格,design style使用材料,material清洁,cleaning保养 maintenance注意事项,announcements油渍处理,oil stain disposal保存,preservelans传承传统的手工制作,从裁切到缝制,做到精益求精.保留原皮风貌,赋予每件作品特有的生命.Lans inherit the traditional craftsmanship, from crop to sew, refine on details. Keep origin leather style, give every works the special life. lans坚持简洁,自然的设计风格.复古,大气是我们不变的艺术追求.突破个性的同时,让您切身体验皮具带给您的自然感受.Lans insist concision, natural design, vintage and generosity is always our pursuit. keeping original leather meanwhile has the character breakthrough, giving you the most experience of nature from the leather made lans选用意大利头层牛皮作为制作材料,保证皮具质感,和美感.更做到经久耐用,让其成为您的长久伴侣.Lans choose Italy first layer of cowhide as our material, to ensure the texture, durability and beauty of the leather . So it can be your Permanente partner.清洁皮具忌用水洗和接触化学溶剂.应用海绵或软布擦去尘,袋包边有缝隙位置,则可用尖头刷子擦除尘垢.Do not clean the leather product by water or chemical solvent. Please use the sponge or soft cloth to clean, for the gap on the edge of the bag, use the cusp brush to dust.日常保养可定期使用同色系的鞋膏擦拭皮袋,使皮料保持光亮润泽,避免作用液体鞋油.上鞋膏时,避免把鞋膏直接涂于皮面上,应先涂于软布或海绵上再进行擦拭.current maintenance can scrub the leather bag by similar color of shoes cream regularly, it can keep the leather bright and glossy, please avoid the liquid shoe polish. And put the shoe polish direct on the cloth or sponge to scrub.避免让皮袋与硬物发生碰撞、磨擦,以免将表面刮花、划破.避免放过重的东西,以免起皱纹和变形.避免在阳光下曝晒,它将导致皮革干裂和褪色.Please refrain from the leather product crash with any hard or sharp stuffs, or it can be ripped. Do not put in over-weight thing, or it will be out of shape and wrinkled.
求真正的高手指点
/>翻译本身没错,但在下会改成Every item is a masterpiece.

The design of Lans,focus on simple,classic antiquity ,generous,and natural style,pursues the [unique character and taste],[and to achieve] extraordinary from harmonious color and sprightly lines.[Its design keeps] the original leather [style and features]while [allows] character breakthroughs,[brings] you the most natural experience from the leatherwares,and recalls people’s [primitive] desire to leatherwares.
用字很多都怪怪的~如古风换成了classic antiquity..比ancient更准确;personality及taste用字逻辑怪,这两物是所有人都有的,再说lz後文用了character.因此需更正统一.;等.句子需删补字不然文法不过关

算了下面直接改好不多说了...槽点太多了
Lans inherits the traditional craftsmanship,from croping to sewing,and constant strive for better quality.Lans keeps the origin leather style,and grants every work a unique life.

Lans  insists on concision,natural design,and vintage and generosity is always our artistic pursuit.Lans keeps the original leather style and features while gives room for character breakthrough,and gives you the most natural leatherware experience.

Lans chooses the first layer of italian cowhide as  raw-material,to ensure the high quality,  good durability and beauty of the leather so that every item can be your permanent partner.

Beware not to wash the leather products by water or chemical solvent.Please use sponge or soft cloth to clean instead.As for the gaps on the edge of the bag,use pointed brush to remove the dust.

Daily maintenance can be done by regularly scrubbing the leather bag with shoes cream of similar color to keep the leather bright and glossy.Please avoid any forms of liquid shoe polish.And beware not to apply any shoe polish directly on the leather but to put the polish on a cloth or sponge first before scrubbing.

Avoid the leather product from anything hard or sharp,or else it would be scratched or ripped.Never put in over-weight objects,or it would be deformed and wrinkled.Prevent the product from too much sun exposure or it would be discolored and cracked.


再问: 这位上仙 您能帮我全部修改一下吗
再答: ....都修改了只是解说部分没有了