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英语改错十处!跪谢 now l'd like to tell you someting about your part-

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英语改错十处!跪谢 now l'd like to tell you someting about your part-time job this vacation,i...
英语改错十处!跪谢
now l'd like to tell you someting about your part-time job this vacation,in which l worked like a guide in travel agency,the work was interesting but tired ,l think it was 4357384 to work this holiday ,it was the first time l have earned money on my own,l've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family ,l used to keep on ask them for money.and now l'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parents ,l 've learnt how to get along well with others ,what's worse .l've gained some working and social experiences and l have learnt what can't be learnt from textbooks,all these will be good for my future ,in word.l had a wonderful and available summer vacation,
通篇句号有点问题.可能掩盖连词错误.1.about your part-time:your改为my,主客体混乱2.in travel agency:我觉得最好加一个冠词,定不定都可以3.support for the family:support及物动词4.keep on ask:asking...