请帮忙把这篇文章修改一下,因为是用在线翻译直接翻译的,所以把里面变扭的该通畅

请帮忙把这篇文章修改一下,因为是用在线翻译直接翻译的,所以把里面变扭的该通畅
In our life, we have to make many decisions. Some of them are important, some are not. You can be in our success in life depends on your decision is a good. It is important to check your decide whether or not to make it popular before? I think it is not important. Because everyone has their own goals, living conditions and ability.
We have our own goals, so we can't make a similar decision, because each person. After graduating from high school, most of my friends decided to research in yuen tonal high school, because it is near their house and for them. However, both my family and I want me to the best high school, in my city. I tried to pass the entrance examination, I think this is a good decision.
However, everyone has different function. We have some strengths and weaknesses. Before making a decision, we should analyze their know we can benefit from the decision, we may loose or what risk we can meet. For example, when we decide which mainly we will at university, it is more important to evaluate our ability, not check whether everyone the same as our research mainly.
In addition, learn from experience is very good, but we just should consider it as a reference. We have different living conditions, so we can't like other people's decision. I wonder where should I learn main program. Most people in many BBS told research in the United States, Canada and Australia is very good. But I can't afford to school, food and accommodation expenses incurred there. Therefore, I choose Sweden just because the tuition is free, this is the most important thing for us a little.
In a word, each with a different goal, function and living conditions. We can not follow the popularity of the decision, but we can refer to it to analyze why they made such a decision, what is our strength, we can do better. In so doing, your decision will be better time.
请用红色的线段标出观点
蓝色的圈，圈出关键词
用蓝色划线的来说明观点
谢谢了

做不上标记.第2行a good换成 a good one.your decide 换成 this decision.because.换成 because the goals,living conditions and ability of many people are different.
我想这可能是一篇入学申请书,我想帮你改但是有的意思我不明白,如After graduating from high school,most of my friends decided to research in yuen tonal high school请把你的中文意思说一下.
In a word,each with a different goal,function and living conditions.We can not follow the popularity of the decision,but we can refer to it to analyze why they made such a decision,what is our strength,we can do better.In so doing,your decision will be better time.
in a word 我想你是要说“一句话”表示总之,但是英语不是这样表示的,希望你补充以后,我再试试改进一下.
再问： 能修改好发我邮箱吗1441377028@qq.com。拜托了，它是关于如何在做出一个成功的决定