作业帮请老师评改书面表达
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请评改书面表达。
解题思路： RUXIA
解题过程：
同学：你写的作文不错能完整的把提示的内容写出来，并能表达对母亲的一份心意。但也存在着词的用法及语法上的错误。 像在五月12号应该是on May 12th. i thought it' s a good way to make mother happy.该句的thought 应是think.自制礼物或贺卡没有写出来。如果文章是10的话，老师给你8分。
Mother's Day is important for everyone and it's a good way to say "thanks" to mothers.On May 12th the students in our class used different ways to cheer mothers up.Some students gave their mothers some gifts and spent lots of money buying gifts for their mothers.Some made some beautiful gifts or cards for their mothers by themselves.Some helped their mothers with housework.I think it's a good way to make mother happy.
In my opinion,giving gifts isn't the most important for mother, the best gift is getting better grades and make progress every day in our school. To make our mothers happier ,let's work harder at our subjects in school .
最终答案：略
解题过程：
同学：你写的作文不错能完整的把提示的内容写出来，并能表达对母亲的一份心意。但也存在着词的用法及语法上的错误。 像在五月12号应该是on May 12th. i thought it' s a good way to make mother happy.该句的thought 应是think.自制礼物或贺卡没有写出来。如果文章是10的话，老师给你8分。
Mother's Day is important for everyone and it's a good way to say "thanks" to mothers.On May 12th the students in our class used different ways to cheer mothers up.Some students gave their mothers some gifts and spent lots of money buying gifts for their mothers.Some made some beautiful gifts or cards for their mothers by themselves.Some helped their mothers with housework.I think it's a good way to make mother happy.
In my opinion,giving gifts isn't the most important for mother, the best gift is getting better grades and make progress every day in our school. To make our mothers happier ,let's work harder at our subjects in school .
最终答案：略