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帮帮改一篇文章中文:我想成功,但我却曾经失败过.我喜欢读书,因此我有一个愿望——写一本书.去年我买了一个本子(笔记本),

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中文:
我想成功,但我却曾经失败过.我喜欢读书,因此我有一个愿望——写一本书.去年我买了一个本子(笔记本),它很漂亮.我买这个本子是为了用来写书的.我很激动,因为我相信我能成功.我每天都想着(记着)这件事.但是当我拿起笔时却一个字也写不出来.所以那个本子上没有一个字,一直是空白的.我很伤心,很失望.最终我放弃了,我把(那个)本子给了我的朋友.她知道后告诉我:“你一定会成功”相信我,不要灰心(放弃)!我很感谢她,她教会了我什么是坚强.
英文:
I want to be successful,but I have failed,I like to reading books,so I have a dream--to write a book.Last year I bought a notebook.The book was used to writing a story.I wasvery excited,because I think I can succeeded.I remembered it everyday.But I wrote no word when I take my pen.So I wrote nothing on that book.I was very sad anddisappointed.At last,I gave up.I gave the book to my friend.She known me ,then told to me:"You can be successful,believe me,don't give up!"Give thanks to my friend,she teach me how to be successful.
我知道下面的英文写的是在不好,所以请麻烦根据上面的中文将下面的英文改一改,词越简单越好,语法别太复杂了.
(如果改得好我另有加分)
I like to reading books改成I like reading books,like to do sth或者是like doing sth,喜欢做某事.
它很漂亮,你没有翻译,[It is beatiful].
The book was used to writing a story,表示目的,不能用动词的ing形式,只能用动词不定式,改成The book was used to write a story.
because I think I can succeeded,就直接是succeed,后面不要加ed.
But I wrote no word when I take my pen.改成But I wrote no words when I took my pen.word应该用复数,而且时态应该是过去时.
She known me ,这个不对,应该可以直接去掉,不需要的
告诉某人,直接就是told me,不需要加to.
我很感谢她,应该是I thanked her a lot.
她教会了我什么是坚强. 应该是she taught me what is the strong.