作业帮帮我修改一下自我介绍～
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帮我修改一下自我介绍～
Hello,everyone.It is really a great honor to have such a chance to stand here.Now please let me introduce myself.My name is Su Pengbo ,I am 14 years old.As my frirnds said I am a
boy who are openness and sunshine,so you can always see the smile in my face.But I am also a persistent boy who is pursuing his own dreams.Though I still have some shortcomings,I have been trying to improve myself and make myself a perfect person.In my spare timeI have many hobbies,such as reading ,I think it not only opens up my eyes but also tells me how to be a good person.And I like picnic with my friends because Ilike fresh air and beautiful hills .
Joining this competation is a new experience to me,I must give you my best performance,and wishing you tu support me to let me have more opportunities to improve myself,I am confident that I can shcceed.
That is all.thank you.
我明天就要拿去参加比赛!
Hello,everyone.It is really a great honor to have such a chance to stand here.Now please let me introduce myself.My name is Su Pengbo ,I am 14 years old.As my frirnds said I am a
boy who are openness and sunshine,so you can always see the smile in my face.But I am also a persistent boy who is pursuing his own dreams.Though I still have some shortcomings,I have been trying to improve myself and make myself a perfect person.In my spare timeI have many hobbies,such as reading ,I think it not only opens up my eyes but also tells me how to be a good person.And I like picnic with my friends because Ilike fresh air and beautiful hills .
Joining this competation is a new experience to me,I must give you my best performance,and wishing you tu support me to let me have more opportunities to improve myself,I am confident that I can shcceed.
That is all.thank you.
我明天就要拿去参加比赛!
总体是不错的
其中有一些拼写错误,如(FRIEND,SUCCEED)等,内容很丰富,很吸引人.
祝你明天演讲成功!
其中有一些拼写错误,如(FRIEND,SUCCEED)等,内容很丰富,很吸引人.
祝你明天演讲成功!