作业帮改错,十处,打印错误不算
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改错,十处,打印错误不算
John was driving home from the station by his car yesterday evening while he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers a hour when another car came out of a side road and hitting him.All John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms were broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following John.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out it.They ran to their cars and had pulled John and the other man out .Then they telephoned a doctor and a police .Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.
John was driving home from the station by his car yesterday evening while he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers a hour when another car came out of a side road and hitting him.All John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms were broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following John.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out it.They ran to their cars and had pulled John and the other man out .Then they telephoned a doctor and a police .Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.
John was driving home from the station【1.改by为in】his car yesterday evening【2.改while为when】he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers【3.改a为an】hour when another car came out of a side road and【4.改 hitting 为 hit】him.【5.改All为Both】John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms【6.改were为was】broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following【7.改John为John‘s】.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out【8.加上of】it.They ran to their cars and【9.改had pulled为pulled】John and the other man out.Then they telephoned a doctor and【10.改a为the】police.Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.
改后版本:
John was driving home from the station in his car yesterday evening when he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers an hour when another car came out of a side road and hit him.Both John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms was broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following John‘s.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out of it.They ran to their cars and pulled John and the other man out.Then they telephoned a doctor and the police.Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.
改后版本:
John was driving home from the station in his car yesterday evening when he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers an hour when another car came out of a side road and hit him.Both John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms was broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following John‘s.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out of it.They ran to their cars and pulled John and the other man out.Then they telephoned a doctor and the police.Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.