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20分 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。
注意：1．日记的开头已为你写好。
2．词数不少于60。
Saturday, May 3 Fine
This morning,i was running in the park as usual.I noticed a wallet on the long chair at the moment i passed by.I went to the wallet and picked it up curiouslly.It seemed that someone left it by accident,i wondered.Considering the anxiety of the loser,i opened up the wallet to find some information .There were about 300yuan and a name card with number printed.So i call the number immediately to contact the loser.Not for long,the other side of the phone answered.After checking his identify,i told him the adress in detail to let him get his wallet back as soon as possible. Finally,the man showed up and sighed with relief .He was extremely excited to see his wallet again.At the same time,he gave me many thanks and tried to give me some money for my selfness behaviour,but I said thank you and refused. Though waiting for him took up much time of mine,i still felt satisfied for helping others.
注意：1．日记的开头已为你写好。
2．词数不少于60。
Saturday, May 3 Fine
This morning,i was running in the park as usual.I noticed a wallet on the long chair at the moment i passed by.I went to the wallet and picked it up curiouslly.It seemed that someone left it by accident,i wondered.Considering the anxiety of the loser,i opened up the wallet to find some information .There were about 300yuan and a name card with number printed.So i call the number immediately to contact the loser.Not for long,the other side of the phone answered.After checking his identify,i told him the adress in detail to let him get his wallet back as soon as possible. Finally,the man showed up and sighed with relief .He was extremely excited to see his wallet again.At the same time,he gave me many thanks and tried to give me some money for my selfness behaviour,but I said thank you and refused. Though waiting for him took up much time of mine,i still felt satisfied for helping others.
解题思路： 每个图必须配一到两句话注意要三段式句与句尽量使用关联词通篇大部分应使用一般过去时结尾有自己的感想
解题过程：
a long chair 应为bench at the moment I passed by 应改为when I passed by ，因为at the moment后面不能接句子。第一句适合使用此句型：be doing when 因此最好用 This morning I was running in the park as usual when I noticed a wallet on the bench . curiouslly应为curiously . It seemed that someone left 这里的left最好用过去完成时had left . 'i opened the wallet to find some information' to find 最好改为and found 因为to find通常表目的。 information这里不如用things或者直接说some money and a card . So I call这里call应该为过去时。 selfness是‘自私’的名词 ，这里用形容词 selfless'无私的‘
解题过程：
a long chair 应为bench at the moment I passed by 应改为when I passed by ，因为at the moment后面不能接句子。第一句适合使用此句型：be doing when 因此最好用 This morning I was running in the park as usual when I noticed a wallet on the bench . curiouslly应为curiously . It seemed that someone left 这里的left最好用过去完成时had left . 'i opened the wallet to find some information' to find 最好改为and found 因为to find通常表目的。 information这里不如用things或者直接说some money and a card . So I call这里call应该为过去时。 selfness是‘自私’的名词 ，这里用形容词 selfless'无私的‘