作业帮我写的高考英语作文,请专家老师帮忙评分(2011江苏) （满分25）
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我写的高考英语作文,请专家老师帮忙评分(2011江苏) （满分25）
From the picture we can see a moving action.The girl want to ease the pain in her monther back.She hangs the bag hard.They are both smiling .The mother is very happy that her daughter can do this.
Think to myself,do I often help my parent do anything?Sometimes,I say I am busy studying .I seldom help my mother do homework or help my father hang the bag.I should not always say I am busy studing .I think now I should do something for my parents.
From now ,I will always wash clothes for them to pay back for their love.Sometimes I will do housework with my mom and I think that must be happy.I also can cook dinner for them if they are busy.I enijoy doing thing for them.Because we love each other.
From the picture we can see a moving action.The girl want to ease the pain in her monther back.She hangs the bag hard.They are both smiling .The mother is very happy that her daughter can do this.
Think to myself,do I often help my parent do anything?Sometimes,I say I am busy studying .I seldom help my mother do homework or help my father hang the bag.I should not always say I am busy studing .I think now I should do something for my parents.
From now ,I will always wash clothes for them to pay back for their love.Sometimes I will do housework with my mom and I think that must be happy.I also can cook dinner for them if they are busy.I enijoy doing thing for them.Because we love each other.
首先审题没问题 要点都有了 没有什么大的语法和拼写错误 在语句连接上还可以 层次比较明朗 但没什么复杂句型 没什么高级词汇 打20分吧 江苏高考英语作文打超过20是要交给大组长再复审的 所以如果不是特别好的作文 阅卷老师一般不会打超过20的 20分很不错了 祝你好运
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