帮忙改下英语作文.不用动原意~如果有句子错的地方改一下就好,有单词用错的地方超微修饰一下~改得好会给加分的~（写的不好啊

帮忙改下英语作文.
不用动原意~如果有句子错的地方改一下就好,有单词用错的地方超微修饰一下~改得好会给加分的~（写的不好啊~）
第一篇：I have many hobbies during my spare time .I like reading books very much ,it make me be knowledgeble .I like listening to music ,too ,it make me relax .I think people have hobbies is good .My family has different hobbies.My father's hobby is walking,he think walking is very health sports .My mother 's hobby is writing ,it make her happy .My grandpa's hobby is playing table tennis,he think it very interesting .My sister 's hobby is dancing ,she like it very much .everyone all has different hobbies ,hobbies is make people have dream.
第二篇：Radio and TV are My Good Friends
I like listening to radio and watching TV very much .I listening to radio and watch TV everyday.Thanks to the TV i know many abroad ’s news everyday .I learn many history from the TV.I learn many geography and story from the radio .Radio and TV are my good friends ,because radio and TV give me many news ,radio and TV are make me knowledgeable .Radio and TV are make me ralex .so I love radio and TV very much .

I have many hobbies during my spare time .I like reading books very much ,AND it makeS me be knowledgeble.I ALSO like listening to music,AND it makeS me relaxED .I think havING hobbies is good .My familIES haVE different hobbies.My father's hobby is walking,AND he thinkS walking is A very health sport去S .My mother 's hobby is writing ,it makeS her happy .My grandpa's hobby is playing table tennis,AND he thinkS it IS very interesting .My sister 's hobby is dancing ,AND she likeS it very much .everyone all has different hobbies ,AND hobbies （去is） make people have dreamS.
Radio and TV are My Good Friends
I like listening to radio and watching TV very much .I listen(去ing） to radio and watch TV everyday.Thanks to the TV i know many （把abroad ’s换为Foreign） news everyday .I learn （去many） history from （去the） TV.I learn many geography and storIES from the radio .Radio and TV are my good friends ,because radio and TV give me many news ,AND radio and TV （去are） make me knowledgeable .Radio and TV （去are） make me ralexED .so I love radio and TV very much
用大写把我觉得需要改改的地方标出来了,你看看行不行呢~
提醒你一下啦：
当两个完整句子（有完整主谓宾）并列用逗号隔开时记得逗号后的句子要有and的~
be词是不能和动词原形连用的哦,要用be+doing构成进行时或者be+done构成被动时态哦
最后记得第三人称单数（单三）的谓语动词要用复数呦!