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Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua.Nowadays a question of whether people can keep pets or not in cities has been widely discussed in our class.Following are our opinions.
Students against keeping pets thinks that it causes environmentral pollute.Meanwhile,some pets make a lots of noise and even hurt people.However,some students have different opinions.They agree to keep pets.Some pets are clever enough to understand their owners and make people’s life much more interesting.And it’s a good way for the old to keep pets as their children so as to warm their life.People keeping pets can learn to live with animals in harmony.
In my opinion,we shouldn’t keep pets.Pets living with people can’t get enough freedom and get close to nature.It is a cruel thing.
That’s all.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
有什么语法错误或者用词不地道的地方请帮忙改正,
1） Following are our opinions.这句用法对吗？
2）全文有什么欠流畅的地方吗？
Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua.Nowadays a question of whether people can keep pets or not in cities has been widely discussed in our class.Following are our opinions.
Students against keeping pets thinks that it causes environmentral pollute.Meanwhile,some pets make a lots of noise and even hurt people.However,some students have different opinions.They agree to keep pets.Some pets are clever enough to understand their owners and make people’s life much more interesting.And it’s a good way for the old to keep pets as their children so as to warm their life.People keeping pets can learn to live with animals in harmony.
In my opinion,we shouldn’t keep pets.Pets living with people can’t get enough freedom and get close to nature.It is a cruel thing.
That’s all.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
有什么语法错误或者用词不地道的地方请帮忙改正,
1） Following are our opinions.这句用法对吗？
2）全文有什么欠流畅的地方吗？
a question of whether (这里的of建议改成about会比较好一点）
“They agree to keep pets.”是不是这样会更好些：As far as they are concerned,they think that……,原句语法上没有错误
“In my opinion,we shouldn’t keep pets.”或者：But I don't agree with them,……
你这篇文章写得不错嘛,没什么语法错误的.
Following are our opinions这句用法对的,全文都挺流畅的阿
“They agree to keep pets.”是不是这样会更好些：As far as they are concerned,they think that……,原句语法上没有错误
“In my opinion,we shouldn’t keep pets.”或者：But I don't agree with them,……
你这篇文章写得不错嘛,没什么语法错误的.
Following are our opinions这句用法对的,全文都挺流畅的阿