作业帮以下是一片英语短文,语法结构较为简单,可能存在不少错误,把短文的错误纠正过来,最好能把短文改得高级点（当然,最重要的是把
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以下是一片英语短文,语法结构较为简单,可能存在不少错误,把短文的错误纠正过来,最好能把短文改得高级点（当然,最重要的是把错误改过来就好~呵呵~
Here I am ,in Beijing,and a thousand miles away home.The weather here is colder and colder,and I become homesick.Now I am in a new city,where I will do all things by myself,and I feel lonely sometimes.You are attentive.You give me a ring once a week.Though you just ask me about the weather here,the custom here,and my stuy,still I owe you a great debt of gratitude.Your voice,through the line,make me warm.Looking back on the past years,I find myself think about how I owe to you.When I am in trouble,you say nothing,just keep me compony and always try your best to give me a hand without hesitance.Thank you ,mom.Thanks your love,and believe me ,I will become stronger!
Here I am ,in Beijing,and a thousand miles away home.The weather here is colder and colder,and I become homesick.Now I am in a new city,where I will do all things by myself,and I feel lonely sometimes.You are attentive.You give me a ring once a week.Though you just ask me about the weather here,the custom here,and my stuy,still I owe you a great debt of gratitude.Your voice,through the line,make me warm.Looking back on the past years,I find myself think about how I owe to you.When I am in trouble,you say nothing,just keep me compony and always try your best to give me a hand without hesitance.Thank you ,mom.Thanks your love,and believe me ,I will become stronger!
好棒的文章啊!
要注意一下,英文需要在每个标点后空格.
Here I am ,in Beijing,a thousand miles from home.The weather here is getting colder and colder,and I’m a little homesick.Now I am alone in a new city,where I have to manage things all by myself.And sometimes I feel lonely.You are always caring.You call me every week.Though you only asks about the weather here,the custom,and my study,still I owe you a great deal of gratitude.Your voice,through the line,makes me feel warm.Looking back on the passing years,I find myself thinking about how much I owe you.When I was in trouble,you didn’t say a word,but kept me comfident and try every way to help me without hesitation.Thank you,mom.Thanks for your love,believing and supporting.I will become stronger!
要注意一下,英文需要在每个标点后空格.
Here I am ,in Beijing,a thousand miles from home.The weather here is getting colder and colder,and I’m a little homesick.Now I am alone in a new city,where I have to manage things all by myself.And sometimes I feel lonely.You are always caring.You call me every week.Though you only asks about the weather here,the custom,and my study,still I owe you a great deal of gratitude.Your voice,through the line,makes me feel warm.Looking back on the passing years,I find myself thinking about how much I owe you.When I was in trouble,you didn’t say a word,but kept me comfident and try every way to help me without hesitation.Thank you,mom.Thanks for your love,believing and supporting.I will become stronger!
以下是一片英语短文,语法结构较为简单,可能存在不少错误,把短文的错误纠正过来,最好能把短文改得高级点（当然,最重要的是把
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