作业帮请大家看看我的这篇英语作文有什么错误,有错误的请帮忙指正.
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请大家看看我的这篇英语作文有什么错误,有错误的请帮忙指正.
可以不用过去式的。
On weekend,I go to the zoo with my parents.The zoo is so big and beautiful.
Look!Here are two pandas .They are so cute .All the pandas like to eat bamboos.
After that ,I see three monkeys .They are so naughty .They like bananas best.
Maybe they think bananas are delicious .Then ,I see a elephant .It's too big.
I like elephants,because they are cute ,too.Last,I see many brids.They like to eat the bread crumbs.I take a photo of them.
This is my a little trip.
I am so happy!
可以不用过去式的。
On weekend,I go to the zoo with my parents.The zoo is so big and beautiful.
Look!Here are two pandas .They are so cute .All the pandas like to eat bamboos.
After that ,I see three monkeys .They are so naughty .They like bananas best.
Maybe they think bananas are delicious .Then ,I see a elephant .It's too big.
I like elephants,because they are cute ,too.Last,I see many brids.They like to eat the bread crumbs.I take a photo of them.
This is my a little trip.
I am so happy!
I see a elephant
a改为an （elephant中的e发的是元音）
It's too big.改为It's very big（too表示程度有点过头了）
This is my a little trip可以改为This is a little trip of mine（语法问题）
a改为an （elephant中的e发的是元音）
It's too big.改为It's very big（too表示程度有点过头了）
This is my a little trip可以改为This is a little trip of mine（语法问题）