作业帮我写了一篇英语作文,大家帮我看看有哪些地方有错误,如语法错误,单词错误等等,
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我写了一篇英语作文,大家帮我看看有哪些地方有错误,如语法错误,单词错误等等,
I have a happy family.There're three people in my family.They're
my father,my mother and I.Everyone loves their family .So do
Let me tell you something about my family.
My father is a clerk.He works in a hospital.He is forty years old.He works very hard.He has lots of hobbies.He likes surfing the Internet and playing basketball.He always teaches me how to learn science and math.I think he is a good father.
I have a happy family.There're three people in my family.They're
my father,my mother and I.Everyone loves their family .So do
Let me tell you something about my family.
My father is a clerk.He works in a hospital.He is forty years old.He works very hard.He has lots of hobbies.He likes surfing the Internet and playing basketball.He always teaches me how to learn science and math.I think he is a good father.
可以了,基本没有语法和单词的错误.
不过整体感觉反覆,句子结构单一,都是主谓宾形式,看得出来是初级者.
不过整体感觉反覆,句子结构单一,都是主谓宾形式,看得出来是初级者.
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