24小时内有答案送分,作文改错!（2）

24小时内有答案送分,作文改错!（2）
Public speaking communications are also very important in our world. In business, it’s the common way to motivate customers to buy merchandises; in politics, the government also uses public speaking communications to announce its policy; in religion, some churches provide the public speaking communications to encourage believers. In fact, in this communication, the sender can send the same message to many receivers at the same time. However, it’s slowly to receive the responds from the receivers.
Here, the model I choose is the college president’s public speaking. Imagine that if you are a college president, you have to make a speaking for those freshmen. First, you should write the prepare paper. Then you have to practice the speech. When you go to the front, you have to speak loudly and attractively for the freshmen. After you finish the speech, the public speaking communication is over. In addition, all students will receive the information from the president-you.
The third model is about media communication. As we know, people always receive the information from media, such as newspaper, radio, TV, etc.
The model is about a TV-show. A person who wants to make a TV-show should do the steps. First, he should get the permission from the TV channel. Then, he has to invite some audiences to join his show. Third, he has prepared the interest things that he wants to talk. When the TV-show ends, his communication to the audience is over.
Compared among these three communication contexts, we can find that each way of communication has processed the information to others. They also can use the spoken communication ways. The unique of one-on-one communication is only two people join in the communication with short period. The unique of public speaking communication is only one speech can communicate the information to all the receivers. The unique of media communication is new and fresh. Everyone can get the latest news from media.

However,it’s slowly to receive --- However,it’s slow to receive
you have to make a speaking for those freshmen --- you have to make a speech to those freshmen
First,you should write the prepare paper --- First,you should write a prepare paper
you have to speak loudly and attractively for the freshmen --- you have to speak loudly and attractively to the freshmen
The third model is about media communication --- The third model is about the media communication