作业帮可以帮我看看这篇英语小短文有语法问题吗,
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可以帮我看看这篇英语小短文有语法问题吗,
是小演讲,
Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about this picture.This is a photo of the black children.The black children may be the poorest children in the world They don't have enough food.They can't receive a good education.They don't have even clean water to drink.But lovely smiles still on thier faces.I hope there are more kind-heart people to care for them.Let them live a better life.
是小演讲,
Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about this picture.This is a photo of the black children.The black children may be the poorest children in the world They don't have enough food.They can't receive a good education.They don't have even clean water to drink.But lovely smiles still on thier faces.I hope there are more kind-heart people to care for them.Let them live a better life.
"They don't have enough food.They can't receive a good education.They don't have even clean water to drink.But lovely smiles still on thier faces.I hope there are more kind-heart people to care for them."
这几句放之间最好再加上一些连词之类的,不然衔接不畅,可以在they前面加入诸如and,then,and then之类的.
还有,注意一下标点断句.
Let them live a better life这一句前面可以加上so that,意为“以便...”,这样看起来或许会更好.
希望以上能帮到你.
这几句放之间最好再加上一些连词之类的,不然衔接不畅,可以在they前面加入诸如and,then,and then之类的.
还有,注意一下标点断句.
Let them live a better life这一句前面可以加上so that,意为“以便...”,这样看起来或许会更好.
希望以上能帮到你.