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请老师帮助修改这篇高三英语作文，谢谢老师
The school should allow student that do not need to wear a school uniform. Since this thing has more advantage than must wear school uniforms. Most of students feel boring to wear same color school uniform. Students wear different colors clothes, it can representative a student character. Some scientist thought that if a student likes wearing red clothes, maybe the student is an enthusiasm person. If a students like wearing blue clothes, maybe the student is a quite person. These are very interesting for each student. For example, if some of students prefer a tranquil lifestyle, they can choose someone who wears blue clothes. Through this way, you can easier to make a friend than before. So if students wear same school uniform every day, not only it extremely boring but also not easier to make a friend. In generally, most of school uniforms are very expensive for most family. For example, In China, some of famous schools, their uniform may spend 300-400 RMB. Some of school’s uniform even spend thousands RMB. A survey indicates that after students graduate, some of students do not wear school uniforms again. So it’s much waste than wear their own clothes. If students can wear their own cloths, their parents needn’t spend lots of money to buy school uniforms. Therefore, they can safe lots of money. Student uniforms will lead student to lack critical thinking. Although somebody think school uniform let students extremely regular, it also lead students to lack critical thinking. For example, if the teacher asks a question to a student, other students will not think the answer. After the student answers, when the teacher asks other students, they may say they agree with the student. Finally, they might even don’t know how to thinking. In conclusion, Students should not wear school uniforms. Since students will feel boring, many school uniforms are extremely expensive, and lead student to lack critical thinking.
请老师帮助批改这篇高三英语作文
The school should allow student that do not need to wear a school uniform. Since this thing has more advantage than must wear school uniforms. Most of students feel boring to wear same color school uniform. Students wear different colors clothes, it can representative a student character. Some scientist thought that if a student likes wearing red clothes, maybe the student is an enthusiasm person. If a students like wearing blue clothes, maybe the student is a quite person. These are very interesting for each student. For example, if some of students prefer a tranquil lifestyle, they can choose someone who wears blue clothes. Through this way, you can easier to make a friend than before. So if students wear same school uniform every day, not only it extremely boring but also not easier to make a friend. In generally, most of school uniforms are very expensive for most family. For example, In China, some of famous schools, their uniform may spend 300-400 RMB. Some of school’s uniform even spend thousands RMB. A survey indicates that after students graduate, some of students do not wear school uniforms again. So it’s much waste than wear their own clothes. If students can wear their own cloths, their parents needn’t spend lots of money to buy school uniforms. Therefore, they can safe lots of money. Student uniforms will lead student to lack critical thinking. Although somebody think school uniform let students extremely regular, it also lead students to lack critical thinking. For example, if the teacher asks a question to a student, other students will not think the answer. After the student answers, when the teacher asks other students, they may say they agree with the student. Finally, they might even don’t know how to thinking. In conclusion, Students should not wear school uniforms. Since students will feel boring, many school uniforms are extremely expensive, and lead student to lack critical thinking.
请老师帮助批改这篇高三英语作文
解题思路： 文章内容语法错误较多，注意词汇的搭配及用法。重复的内容较多，较累赘。把改后的文章重新整理一遍，并且多练习，可取得大进步。
解题过程：
The school should allow student that do not need to wear a school uniform. 此句句式语法错误。allow sb. to do sththat 从句中无主语.改为：The school should allow students not to wear a school uniform.
Since this thing has more advantage than must wear school uniforms. 语法错误。than后既不是句子（无主语），也不是短语（有动词must wear）改为：Since it has more advantages than wearing school uniforms.
Most of students feel boring to wear same color school uniform. 应用句型feel it adj to do ...应改为Most of students feel it boring to wear the same color school uniform.
Students wear different colors clothes, it can representative a student character. 两个简单句之间要用并列连词，或改为从句。Students wear different colors clothes, which can representative a student character.
Some scientist thought that if a student likes wearing red clothes, maybe the student is an enthusiasm person. 此句正确，稍作改动,会更好。Some scientists consider students who likes wearing red clothes to be enthusiasm.
If a students like wearing blue clothes, maybe the student is a quite person. 改为If a student like wearing blue ones, maybe he is a quite different person.
These are very interesting for each student. For example, if some of students prefer a tranquil lifestyle, they can choose someone who wears blue clothes.改为 if some of students prefer a tranquil lifestyle, they can choose to wear blue clothes.
Through this way, you can easier to make a friend than before. 改为：In this way, you can make a friend more easily than before.
So if students wear same school uniform every day, not only it extremely boring but also not easier to make a friend. 与上文重复，句式单调，改为So wearing same school uniform every day is not only extremely boring but also bad for making a friend.
In generally, most of school uniforms are very expensive for most family.短语错误，改为In general, most of school uniforms are very expensive for most family.
For example, In China, some of famous schools, their uniform may spend 300-400 RMB.改为In some of famous schools of China, their uniform may spend up to 300-400 RMB
Some of school’s uniform even spend thousands RMB. spend 的主语应为人，改为Some of school’s uniform even cost thousands of RMB.
A survey indicates that after students graduate, some of students do not wear school uniforms again.改为after graduatation
So it’s much waste than wear their own clothes.改为it’s a waste of money .
If students can wear their own cloths, their parents needn’t spend lots of money to buy school uniforms.spend 的搭配错误。spend time doing ...改为 their parents needn’t spend lots of money buying school uniforms.
Therefore, they can save lots of money.
Student uniforms will lead student to lack critical thinking. Although somebody think school uniform let students extremely regular, it also lead students to lack critical thinking. let sb. do ..应为：let students be extremely regular。把第一句去掉，重复。
For example, if the teacher asks a question to a student, other students will not think the answer. After the student answers, when the teacher asks other students, they may say they agree with the student.改为：if the teacher asks a question to a student, other students will not think the answer and may say they agree with the student
Finally, they might even don’t know how to think..
In conclusion, Students should not wear school uniforms since students will feel boring, many school uniforms are extremely expensive, and it leads student to lack critical thinking.
解题过程：
The school should allow student that do not need to wear a school uniform. 此句句式语法错误。allow sb. to do sththat 从句中无主语.改为：The school should allow students not to wear a school uniform.
Since this thing has more advantage than must wear school uniforms. 语法错误。than后既不是句子（无主语），也不是短语（有动词must wear）改为：Since it has more advantages than wearing school uniforms.
Most of students feel boring to wear same color school uniform. 应用句型feel it adj to do ...应改为Most of students feel it boring to wear the same color school uniform.
Students wear different colors clothes, it can representative a student character. 两个简单句之间要用并列连词，或改为从句。Students wear different colors clothes, which can representative a student character.
Some scientist thought that if a student likes wearing red clothes, maybe the student is an enthusiasm person. 此句正确，稍作改动,会更好。Some scientists consider students who likes wearing red clothes to be enthusiasm.
If a students like wearing blue clothes, maybe the student is a quite person. 改为If a student like wearing blue ones, maybe he is a quite different person.
These are very interesting for each student. For example, if some of students prefer a tranquil lifestyle, they can choose someone who wears blue clothes.改为 if some of students prefer a tranquil lifestyle, they can choose to wear blue clothes.
Through this way, you can easier to make a friend than before. 改为：In this way, you can make a friend more easily than before.
So if students wear same school uniform every day, not only it extremely boring but also not easier to make a friend. 与上文重复，句式单调，改为So wearing same school uniform every day is not only extremely boring but also bad for making a friend.
In generally, most of school uniforms are very expensive for most family.短语错误，改为In general, most of school uniforms are very expensive for most family.
For example, In China, some of famous schools, their uniform may spend 300-400 RMB.改为In some of famous schools of China, their uniform may spend up to 300-400 RMB
Some of school’s uniform even spend thousands RMB. spend 的主语应为人，改为Some of school’s uniform even cost thousands of RMB.
A survey indicates that after students graduate, some of students do not wear school uniforms again.改为after graduatation
So it’s much waste than wear their own clothes.改为it’s a waste of money .
If students can wear their own cloths, their parents needn’t spend lots of money to buy school uniforms.spend 的搭配错误。spend time doing ...改为 their parents needn’t spend lots of money buying school uniforms.
Therefore, they can save lots of money.
Student uniforms will lead student to lack critical thinking. Although somebody think school uniform let students extremely regular, it also lead students to lack critical thinking. let sb. do ..应为：let students be extremely regular。把第一句去掉，重复。
For example, if the teacher asks a question to a student, other students will not think the answer. After the student answers, when the teacher asks other students, they may say they agree with the student.改为：if the teacher asks a question to a student, other students will not think the answer and may say they agree with the student
Finally, they might even don’t know how to think..
In conclusion, Students should not wear school uniforms since students will feel boring, many school uniforms are extremely expensive, and it leads student to lack critical thinking.