请英语达人翻译这篇短篇恐怖故事,尽量考虑英语表达方式,谢谢,好的话再加50分

请英语达人翻译这篇短篇恐怖故事,尽量考虑英语表达方式,谢谢,好的话再加50分
没人和我抢了
有一个男生晚上要坐公车回家,可是因为他到站牌等的时候太晚了,他也不确定到底还
有没有车.又不想走路.因为他家很远很偏僻,所以只好等着有没有末班车.等啊
等啊 . 他正觉得应该没有车的时候,突然看见远处有一辆公车出现了.他很高兴
的去拦车. 一上车他发现这末班很怪,照理说最后一班车人应该不多,因为路线偏远,但
是这台车却坐满了...只有一个空位,而且车上静悄悄地没有半个人说话. 他觉得
有点诡异,可是仍然走向那个唯一的空位坐下来,那空位的旁边有个女的坐在那里 ,等
他一坐下,那个女的就悄声对他说:"你不应该坐这班车的," 他觉得很奇怪,那个女人继
续说:"这班车,不是给活人坐的." "你一上车,他们(比一比车上的人)就会抓你去
当替死鬼的." 他很害怕,可是又不知道该怎么办才好,结果那个女的对他说:"没关系,
我可以帮你逃出去." 于是她就拖着他拉开窗户跳了下去,当他们跳的时候,他还听见"
车"里的人大喊大叫着" 竟然让他跑了"的声音. 等他站稳时候,他发现他们站在一
个荒凉的山坡,他松了一口气,连忙对那个女的道谢. 那个女的却露出了奇怪的微笑:"
"现在,没有人跟我抢了
尽量也要有恐怖气氛

One evening, the sky was darkening under the black thunderheads that swirled ominously across the lesser darkness of the evening sky, there was a boy who wanted to take a bus for going home. As it was quite late when he reached the bus stop, he wasn’t sure if there’s still any bus servicing the route……He had no choice but to wait for the last bus because his house was far and remote and he wouldn’t want to walk home. He waited and waited, when he was about to give up, he saw a bus appeared at the distance……..The bus stopped for him and he happily stepped onto it.
Once he was in the bus, a strange and eerie feeling overwhelmed him. With no air-conditioning, the bus seemed very cold and it was almost fully loaded which was unusual for a long-distance bus at this hour. All the seats were occupied except one and there was a spooky silence in the bus because nobody was talking. Despite feeling weird, he still chose to settle down on the only vacant seat which was next to a female passenger.
Once he was seated, the woman whispered in such a low voice that he almost couldn’t hear, “you shouldn’t have taken this bus, it is not for the living”. He could sense the icy cold and odorous breath coming from the woman as she spoke.……."Now that you’re here, they will steal your body away!” She pointed her finger to the passengers as she continued.
He panicked and didn’t know what to do; but the woman consoled him, ”Don’t worry, I can help you escape.” So, she opened the window and jumped out dragging him along; on his way out, he could still hear the passengers shouting inside the bus, ”How can he actually run away!”……..
When he finally stood up, he found himself on a desolate hillside, the night was in total darkness now and there’s an uncanny silence around. He breathed a sigh of relief and thanked the woman. But she displayed a very unnerving smile, ”Now, no one is going to grab you from me”……………
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再问： 标题怎么翻译？no one is going to grab you from me可以理解成没人和她抢座位？
再答： 首先要纠正您的错误理解，no one is going to grab you from me 与抢座位完全没有关系。这句话直译的意思是：没人可以从我这将你抓走。 至于标题，如果要引人入胜，不需要这么直白，建议您考虑“现在你是我的了”。Now you're mine.