作业帮求英语大神英语短文改错 如果可以确保对的同时可以在原文基础上填上自己的想法
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求英语大神英语短文改错 如果可以确保对的同时可以在原文基础上填上自己的想法
Howdo people usually think of masks?In my opinion,there are two kinds of masksin the life; Even though all the masks are used to cover something,but the essence of them are totally different,one is justnormal masks,people put masks on their face just for working,like actors andfiremen,but the other kind of masks is that people use it for pretending,thisis an abstract description.What we learned about from class is the second one.
Everyone has at least one or two “pretendingmasks” in the real life.Different situation,they use different masks.The firstclass of masks,we talked about what’s the mask and people in what jobs need towear masks.We wrote what we thought in the paper,most of us can think indifferent way and found something about “pretending masks”.
Lastweek,we made a mask in drama class.We spent two class let everyone had a mask.In first class,I didn’t find my partner,so I didn’t make it,but when I waswatching how others made masks,I got a lot of knowledge and guidelines.
最好就添多点自己的想法 不添也没关系 改得好也会采纳
Howdo people usually think of masks?In my opinion,there are two kinds of masksin the life; Even though all the masks are used to cover something,but the essence of them are totally different,one is justnormal masks,people put masks on their face just for working,like actors andfiremen,but the other kind of masks is that people use it for pretending,thisis an abstract description.What we learned about from class is the second one.
Everyone has at least one or two “pretendingmasks” in the real life.Different situation,they use different masks.The firstclass of masks,we talked about what’s the mask and people in what jobs need towear masks.We wrote what we thought in the paper,most of us can think indifferent way and found something about “pretending masks”.
Lastweek,we made a mask in drama class.We spent two class let everyone had a mask.In first class,I didn’t find my partner,so I didn’t make it,but when I waswatching how others made masks,I got a lot of knowledge and guidelines.
最好就添多点自己的想法 不添也没关系 改得好也会采纳
To what extent do people think of masks? I personally consider that there are two kinds of masks in life; one are the normal masks used for working purposes and the other type is used for pretending. Even though all the masks are used to cover something, but the essence of them are totally different. For second type of mask was what we acknowledged from class time.
Everyone has at least one or two "masks” in real life and are often manipulated with in order to hide identities. Within different situations, different masks are being used. The firstclass of masks, we talked about was what kind of jobs would require people to wear masks. We wrote down what we thought, and most of us considered in different ways thus finding something about “pretending masks."
Last week, we made a mask in drama class. We spent two class time and let everyone to have mask each.During first class, I didn’t find my partner, so I couldn't make it, but when I was watching how others made masks, I greatly acknowledged from the procedure and guidelines.
我稍微给你 改了改,然后修正了一些语法错误,我不知道你这篇文章的含义是什么.如果要我写一篇关于面具的作文,请看下面：
When life throws lemons at you, find yourself a mask and hide from life.
What if we lived in a world where the right thing to do was to hide
from your problems and avoid the truth? What would it be like if
everyone acted as someone else and rejected who they truly were? Imagine
a world where everyone was given their own mask when they were born. It
would be something handy that would camouflage them and protect from
embarrassment, bullies, and other things damaging to the human soul. The
world might look a little something like this…
It starts as a normally average day. You wake up around six, eat cereal
for breakfast, and then head off to meet you friends at the bus stop.
Immediately upon your arrival at the bus stop, you check to make sure
your mask is securely in your backpack. It’s there for your protection;
you do not want to get hurt today. Once you have checked, you start
talking with your friends, about nothing in particular. Your friend
starts telling stupid jokes, so you throw on your mask so you appear to
be laughing, when in the realm of reality in your head, you are pleading
with them to stop. Soon the bus comes, and you climb up the steps
gingerly.
Once on the bus, you sit with your friend, the high-maintenance one with
all the relationship problems. She immediately starts telling you about
how her latest boyfriend was a jerk and how he wounded her pride, and
you gently slip on your mask again, to conceal the fact that you really
do not care about her problems, but are instead thinking about what you
are going to have for lunch. But does she know you are not listening? Of
course not, you have your mask on.
The bell for first period rings and you slip into your seat just as your
teacher starts telling you about all the “exciting” things you will
learn about today. “Exciting” to you sounds more like catching up on
some sleep, so once again you place your mask on your face and appear to
be listening, while in actuality, you are sleeping peacefully. The day
goes on with little to no difference than every other day. There are
several other instances where you much put your mask on in order to
avoid having to actually feel sorry for someone, or really mean what you
say or do. God forbid you would actually have to genuinely feel an
emotion, as opposed to just putting on your mask and pretending you
care.
Then suddenly, bam! It hits you like a ton of bricks. Never before has
it bothered you that you are living in a fake world full of fake people
with fake masks. However, now it’s like your emotions are knocking at
the door of your reality, begging to be let in and dusted off. You try
pulling off your own mask, but it seems to be stuck on with some sort of
force to be reckoned with; a kind of emotionless glue that you have
been adding for your whole life. It takes you a minute to realize that
you have made your entire life about being what everyone else wants you
to be, instead of choosing what to become for yourself. You act, feel,
and speak the way the world expects you to. All at once you feel like a
puppet, being controlled by an evil, cold-blooded, impersonal master,
and the more you think about it, the more this unimpassioned being
begins to look familiar. When you observe a little harder, you realize
that it looks a lot like you. You are holding yourself back from the
real world. You are leading a fake life.
Just because we do not have our own masks to hide ourselves in this
world, does not mean that we do not do something similar whenever we are
faced with a challenging or emotionally heavy situation. Think about
the last time you genuinely cared for a friend’s sticky situation, or
stuck up for yourself. The next time life throws you lemons, grab those
lemons and tell them who is boss, genuinely and sensibly. You and only
you are in charge of your life and how you feel. Do not simply pretend
to be something someone else wants you to be. If they do not like who
you truly are, then they are no friend of yours. Challenge yourself to
always be genuine, and stop lying to yourself that there’s such a thing
as a wrong emotion. Life is too short to always be worrying about what
everyone else thinks.
Everyone has at least one or two "masks” in real life and are often manipulated with in order to hide identities. Within different situations, different masks are being used. The firstclass of masks, we talked about was what kind of jobs would require people to wear masks. We wrote down what we thought, and most of us considered in different ways thus finding something about “pretending masks."
Last week, we made a mask in drama class. We spent two class time and let everyone to have mask each.During first class, I didn’t find my partner, so I couldn't make it, but when I was watching how others made masks, I greatly acknowledged from the procedure and guidelines.
我稍微给你 改了改,然后修正了一些语法错误,我不知道你这篇文章的含义是什么.如果要我写一篇关于面具的作文,请看下面：
When life throws lemons at you, find yourself a mask and hide from life.
What if we lived in a world where the right thing to do was to hide
from your problems and avoid the truth? What would it be like if
everyone acted as someone else and rejected who they truly were? Imagine
a world where everyone was given their own mask when they were born. It
would be something handy that would camouflage them and protect from
embarrassment, bullies, and other things damaging to the human soul. The
world might look a little something like this…
It starts as a normally average day. You wake up around six, eat cereal
for breakfast, and then head off to meet you friends at the bus stop.
Immediately upon your arrival at the bus stop, you check to make sure
your mask is securely in your backpack. It’s there for your protection;
you do not want to get hurt today. Once you have checked, you start
talking with your friends, about nothing in particular. Your friend
starts telling stupid jokes, so you throw on your mask so you appear to
be laughing, when in the realm of reality in your head, you are pleading
with them to stop. Soon the bus comes, and you climb up the steps
gingerly.
Once on the bus, you sit with your friend, the high-maintenance one with
all the relationship problems. She immediately starts telling you about
how her latest boyfriend was a jerk and how he wounded her pride, and
you gently slip on your mask again, to conceal the fact that you really
do not care about her problems, but are instead thinking about what you
are going to have for lunch. But does she know you are not listening? Of
course not, you have your mask on.
The bell for first period rings and you slip into your seat just as your
teacher starts telling you about all the “exciting” things you will
learn about today. “Exciting” to you sounds more like catching up on
some sleep, so once again you place your mask on your face and appear to
be listening, while in actuality, you are sleeping peacefully. The day
goes on with little to no difference than every other day. There are
several other instances where you much put your mask on in order to
avoid having to actually feel sorry for someone, or really mean what you
say or do. God forbid you would actually have to genuinely feel an
emotion, as opposed to just putting on your mask and pretending you
care.
Then suddenly, bam! It hits you like a ton of bricks. Never before has
it bothered you that you are living in a fake world full of fake people
with fake masks. However, now it’s like your emotions are knocking at
the door of your reality, begging to be let in and dusted off. You try
pulling off your own mask, but it seems to be stuck on with some sort of
force to be reckoned with; a kind of emotionless glue that you have
been adding for your whole life. It takes you a minute to realize that
you have made your entire life about being what everyone else wants you
to be, instead of choosing what to become for yourself. You act, feel,
and speak the way the world expects you to. All at once you feel like a
puppet, being controlled by an evil, cold-blooded, impersonal master,
and the more you think about it, the more this unimpassioned being
begins to look familiar. When you observe a little harder, you realize
that it looks a lot like you. You are holding yourself back from the
real world. You are leading a fake life.
Just because we do not have our own masks to hide ourselves in this
world, does not mean that we do not do something similar whenever we are
faced with a challenging or emotionally heavy situation. Think about
the last time you genuinely cared for a friend’s sticky situation, or
stuck up for yourself. The next time life throws you lemons, grab those
lemons and tell them who is boss, genuinely and sensibly. You and only
you are in charge of your life and how you feel. Do not simply pretend
to be something someone else wants you to be. If they do not like who
you truly are, then they are no friend of yours. Challenge yourself to
always be genuine, and stop lying to yourself that there’s such a thing
as a wrong emotion. Life is too short to always be worrying about what
everyone else thinks.