请帮我检查下~看英语通顺吗?
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请帮我检查下~看英语通顺吗?
sorry
If unsatisfied may return goods.But you should provide the complete postage.And cannot receive immediately refunds money.
Because I have not received the cash at present,only receives the bank draft.I will possibly receive the money about 40 days.Was sorry very much that please forgive.Whether can after I receive the money the part refunds money for you?
Wishes your good luck
Best Regards!
sorry
If unsatisfied may return goods.But you should provide the complete postage.And cannot receive immediately refunds money.
Because I have not received the cash at present,only receives the bank draft.I will possibly receive the money about 40 days.Was sorry very much that please forgive.Whether can after I receive the money the part refunds money for you?
Wishes your good luck
Best Regards!
.不顺.太不顺了.给楼主改了改.
I am very sorry.
If you are unsatisfied,you may return the goods.However,you should provide the complete postage.Please note that I will not be able to refund your money immediately because at present,I have not yet received the cash; I have only received the bank draft.I will possibly receive the money in about 40 days.I apologize sincerely for your forgiveness.Is it possible to give you the refind after I receive the money?
Wish you good luck.
Best Regards,
署名
其中最后一句“Whether can after I receive the money the part refunds money for you?” 咱不敢肯定是否明白了楼主的意思 是想说“能否在我收到钱之后再退款给您呢?” 如果是就没问题了 不是的话咱上面最后一句得改改
另外书信的习惯是在最后祝福语后加逗号 然后署名.
I am very sorry.
If you are unsatisfied,you may return the goods.However,you should provide the complete postage.Please note that I will not be able to refund your money immediately because at present,I have not yet received the cash; I have only received the bank draft.I will possibly receive the money in about 40 days.I apologize sincerely for your forgiveness.Is it possible to give you the refind after I receive the money?
Wish you good luck.
Best Regards,
署名
其中最后一句“Whether can after I receive the money the part refunds money for you?” 咱不敢肯定是否明白了楼主的意思 是想说“能否在我收到钱之后再退款给您呢?” 如果是就没问题了 不是的话咱上面最后一句得改改
另外书信的习惯是在最后祝福语后加逗号 然后署名.