作业帮求高手帮忙修改下4级作文!
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求高手帮忙修改下4级作文!
自己拼的作文模板，本人能力有限，希望能帮我修改的更得体。
In contemporary fast-paced world and with the booming economy,the dawn of new century witnessed the increasing popularity of__.It is here to stay whether you like it or not.However,The main reason why __ is,Perhaps,for ......Should we put the blame on it?Is it a sound thing for the ivory towar students?The answer is unnecessarily.
There is no denying that there are several advantage with__.Initially,…;Besides,…;last but not the least,…..Nevertheless,just as no garden has no weeds and __ is not an exception.It has some potential problem .perhaps,the most important one is ___ .In addition,…… what’s more,……
As far as I am concerned,despite of its potential problems,___ is still an excellent choice for the ivory tower students.After all,compared with …….,it enables students to save more,learn more and be more capable in dealing with practical issues.
自己拼的作文模板，本人能力有限，希望能帮我修改的更得体。
In contemporary fast-paced world and with the booming economy,the dawn of new century witnessed the increasing popularity of__.It is here to stay whether you like it or not.However,The main reason why __ is,Perhaps,for ......Should we put the blame on it?Is it a sound thing for the ivory towar students?The answer is unnecessarily.
There is no denying that there are several advantage with__.Initially,…;Besides,…;last but not the least,…..Nevertheless,just as no garden has no weeds and __ is not an exception.It has some potential problem .perhaps,the most important one is ___ .In addition,…… what’s more,……
As far as I am concerned,despite of its potential problems,___ is still an excellent choice for the ivory tower students.After all,compared with …….,it enables students to save more,learn more and be more capable in dealing with practical issues.
看出几个小问题,第一段 第一句混乱,整理下,in contemporary with the economy booming and the world changed fast-paced,
the answer is unnecessary!
It can't be denyed that .
后面也要修改下,尽量少用中国式思维,力求简洁明了,作文在于让老师明白,出彩可以加些定于从句.注意名词单复数形式,
the answer is unnecessary!
It can't be denyed that .
后面也要修改下,尽量少用中国式思维,力求简洁明了,作文在于让老师明白,出彩可以加些定于从句.注意名词单复数形式,