作业帮球帮忙修改英语作文阿.
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球帮忙修改英语作文阿.
How I change(题目)
I've changed a lot last year.
I used to be very short and have short hair.But now,I'm taller and have long hair.（阿就这个留长发不知道有没有什么更好的说法呢?）I uesd to be outgoing and used to smile.and now I'm more quiet.
I enjoyed writing before and used to read books on weekends.Now I prefer watch TV to read books.My favorite subject is math rather than history,my hobby also have change!And I can't stand bananas before,but now I eat them every day.I think it would be a good hobit.
Pople sure change!
呃 ..我觉得阿,这文章有点千篇一律了,句型来来去去就那么几个,就希望修改之后不会出现语病然后内容能丰富些吧。
恩 ..对了我现在是读初三,字数要求在100词左右。
How I change(题目)
I've changed a lot last year.
I used to be very short and have short hair.But now,I'm taller and have long hair.（阿就这个留长发不知道有没有什么更好的说法呢?）I uesd to be outgoing and used to smile.and now I'm more quiet.
I enjoyed writing before and used to read books on weekends.Now I prefer watch TV to read books.My favorite subject is math rather than history,my hobby also have change!And I can't stand bananas before,but now I eat them every day.I think it would be a good hobit.
Pople sure change!
呃 ..我觉得阿,这文章有点千篇一律了,句型来来去去就那么几个,就希望修改之后不会出现语病然后内容能丰富些吧。
恩 ..对了我现在是读初三,字数要求在100词左右。
想请问一下,你要修改的作文在哪呢?
再问： 恩等一下行么我在打了。
再答： 哦哦行，最好说一下你现在在读那个阶段 How I‘ve changed (题目可以改的吗？) I've changed a lot since last year.(完成时不能跟一般过去直接搭配) I was once very short with short hair.But now,I'm taller with long hair.I uesd to be outgoing hanging a big smile on face.While now I become more quiet. I enjoyed writing before and made it a habit to read books on weekends. Now I prefer to watch TV than to read books. My favorite subject is math rather than history.(逗号、句号要分清楚！！！)My hobby also have changed! I can't stand banana(一类水果用单数就可) before, but now I eat them every day.I think it would be a good start. People will surely change,including me! 内容讲得比较浅层面的，如果能够再深入点就好了，但是考虑到你是初三的，我现在在念大学，都忘了初三应该的度， 你还可以写说日常交往方面的改变，从叛逆的到理解父母对你的付出等等 希望看到你有更大的进步！！！
再问： 恩等一下行么我在打了。
再答： 哦哦行，最好说一下你现在在读那个阶段 How I‘ve changed (题目可以改的吗？) I've changed a lot since last year.(完成时不能跟一般过去直接搭配) I was once very short with short hair.But now,I'm taller with long hair.I uesd to be outgoing hanging a big smile on face.While now I become more quiet. I enjoyed writing before and made it a habit to read books on weekends. Now I prefer to watch TV than to read books. My favorite subject is math rather than history.(逗号、句号要分清楚！！！)My hobby also have changed! I can't stand banana(一类水果用单数就可) before, but now I eat them every day.I think it would be a good start. People will surely change,including me! 内容讲得比较浅层面的，如果能够再深入点就好了，但是考虑到你是初三的，我现在在念大学，都忘了初三应该的度， 你还可以写说日常交往方面的改变，从叛逆的到理解父母对你的付出等等 希望看到你有更大的进步！！！