作业帮请求帮忙修改英语作文.
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请求帮忙修改英语作文.
写了作文,可是不知道怎么修改.对着参考答案也只能看到别人的思路,不知道自己的问题究竟在哪里.十分希望有朋友可以帮我看看,给我指正!
Directions:Supposeyou are going to study abroad and share an apartment with John,a local student.Write him to email to
1)tell him about your living habits,and
2)ask for advice about living there.
我的答案是：
Dear John,
I am your newroommate who come from China a different country form yours in the futureschool life.It is a very exciting things for me studying and living abroad butfill of much difficult ,so I would like to communicate you with my livinghabits.First of all,I am a quiet guy ,can not tolerant noisy ,but music arewelcome.Secondly,I am crazy in tidy ,even need a long time to taking shower.Last,I did not foster a good habits so I always sleep late in the night.This is thefirst time I go abroad,I do not much about your country and the life there,can you give me some advice about living there I expect your message as soon as possible.
Yours
Li Ming
写了作文,可是不知道怎么修改.对着参考答案也只能看到别人的思路,不知道自己的问题究竟在哪里.十分希望有朋友可以帮我看看,给我指正!
Directions:Supposeyou are going to study abroad and share an apartment with John,a local student.Write him to email to
1)tell him about your living habits,and
2)ask for advice about living there.
我的答案是：
Dear John,
I am your newroommate who come from China a different country form yours in the futureschool life.It is a very exciting things for me studying and living abroad butfill of much difficult ,so I would like to communicate you with my livinghabits.First of all,I am a quiet guy ,can not tolerant noisy ,but music arewelcome.Secondly,I am crazy in tidy ,even need a long time to taking shower.Last,I did not foster a good habits so I always sleep late in the night.This is thefirst time I go abroad,I do not much about your country and the life there,can you give me some advice about living there I expect your message as soon as possible.
Yours
Li Ming
第一句错了,建议将来时,我将要成为你的新室友,
form 改from
a very exciting things 单数
communicate you with my livinghabits 建议改为 communicate with you about my living habits
toleran 动词 tolerate
music are 改 is
taking showe take a shower
did 改do
do not much +know
the life 去the
can you give me 前 +so
message是可数加s
你写的挺不错的的,高级句型和短语放的位置也比较好,不懂请回复
form 改from
a very exciting things 单数
communicate you with my livinghabits 建议改为 communicate with you about my living habits
toleran 动词 tolerate
music are 改 is
taking showe take a shower
did 改do
do not much +know
the life 去the
can you give me 前 +so
message是可数加s
你写的挺不错的的,高级句型和短语放的位置也比较好,不懂请回复