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短文改错Dear Editor,Traditional,Chinese regard Spring Festival a

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短文改错
Dear Editor,
Traditional,Chinese regard Spring Festival as the happiest time of the year.But one of my neighbors' apartments catch fire on the first day of the Lunar New Year.Now,fire disaters are not uncommon at this time of year,but i was quite confused find some onlookers so very excited ai the sight of their neighbor's house on fire as if it were a fireworks show.That shocked me most was that.Some of the onlooker complained that the fire was not big enough i could't describe his feelings at the time.Indignation?Disdain?None exactly.But i was certainly speechless.When i clamed down,i could't help thought what had gone wrong with these people.How can this problem be solved?
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Dear Editor,
(Traditionally),Chinese regard Spring Festival as the happiest time of (a) year.But one of my neighbors' apartments (caught) fire on the first day of the Lunar New Year.Now,fire disasters are not uncommon at this time of year,but I was quite confused (加入to) find some onlookers so/very(此处将so/very去掉任意一个) excited at the sight of their neighbor's house on fire as if it were a fireworks show.(What) shocked me most was that some of the (onlookers) complained that the fire was not big enough.I could't describe (my) feelings at the time.Indignation?Disdain?(Neither) exactly.But I was certainly speechless.When I clamed down,I could't help (thinking) what had gone wrong with these people.How can this problem be solved?