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My bedroom Look!This is my bedroom.My bedroom isn't very big

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My bedroom Look!This is my bedroom.My bedroom isn't very big,but is very tidy.There is a windo
w in the wall.There is a bed near the window.The bed is black and white.I often sleep in it everynight.There is a board behind a blue desk.And there is a light in my bedroom.The light is brighter.Although my bedroom is not very beautiful,but I also like it very much.
Do you like my bedroom?What about yours?
改错、评价,最好还能翻译一下!
1.去掉every night,因为前面已有了频度副词:often
2.去掉Although,或but,两者不能同时用
文字比较流畅,不错的文章