英语翻译我刚写了份英文的自我简历,其中有一句,不知道怎么写好.这项运动不仅可以让我身体健康,还可以让我了解团队合作.我写

英语翻译
我刚写了份英文的自我简历,其中有一句,不知道怎么写好.
这项运动不仅可以让我身体健康,还可以让我了解团队合作.
我写的是"Not only this sport can keep me healthy,but also show me what is teamwork."
但是感觉不太对,不知道能这样写不,求个高人给看下.
另外我把我写的全篇发上来,麻烦给看下哪有写的不对的地方,写的不好的地方吧,语法错误什么的.(太复杂的单词我也不会,就像我这样的通俗点的就好)
辛苦了!回答详细的话我再给追加点分吧
Good morning,Sir!
I’m great honored to be here for this interview,first let me introduce myself.
I am **,from Jinken College of technology,major in Computer Networks and Communication.During the past 3 years,I worked hard and formed a solid foundation.I am skilled at WIindows Sever 2003 and a number of lot office software,such as WORD、EXCEL、CAD、EWB and so on.I passed the computer rank 1 test .I having the skills of PC installation,trouble shooting and testing,and I am a H3C certified network engineers.
Besides,I am interested in English .I passed the PRETCO (B).At school,I learned the computer special English by myself and often go to “English corner” to improve my oral English.
In addition to study,I took part in many practical works.During holiday,I have worked in KFC,TV factory of Panda and Hongtusanbao.
I have a good few hobbies and basketball is my favorite.Not only this sport can keep me healthy,but also show me what is teamwork.
It’s my belief that "no pain,no gain." If luckily I have the opportunity to work in ********,I will try my best in the work.
That is all,thank you for listening!

还是有点小语法错误:
1.i have(not having) skills of...
2.and i am a H3C certified network engineer(s)
3.to improve my oral communication skills in English.
4.实习的话可以这么说 i took an internship in kfc.during holiday.
5.i have a lots of hobbies,especially in basketball.Playing basketball let me get great benefits for my health,and give me more chances to learn how to get along with different kinds of people.