请老师分析我的句子有没有错
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请老师分析我的句子有没有错
overall,l agree that children are able to grasp some particular skills ;however ,those who want to be good in such fileds ,like music art or sport ,really needs some talent(或者 aptitude) (可不可以去掉those直接用 who从句作为主语从句need 为宾语)
overall,l agree that children are able to grasp some particular skills ;however ,those who want to be good in such fileds ,like music art or sport ,really needs some talent(或者 aptitude) (可不可以去掉those直接用 who从句作为主语从句need 为宾语)
前面的 Overall, I agree that children are able to grasp some particular skills 不存在问题,后面有几处错误.
1、such as 或 such…as 是固定搭配,不能讲 such like 或 such…like.可以修改如下:
* such fields as music, art or sport
* some fields like music, art or sport
2、those who want to be good in such fields as music, art or sport, really needs some talent(上面提到过的此处已经修正)中也有两处不妥:
* those 是复数主语.后面的动词不能用单三形式 needs;
* who want to be goodin such fields as music 是限制性定语从句,后面的逗号要去掉.
修改如下:
however, those who want to be good in such fields as music, art or sport really need some talent
再问: 那么可不可以去掉those直接用 who引导的从句作为主语从句need 为宾语)
再答: those 既是后面 need some talent 的主语,也是 who 引导的定语从句的先行词,句子没有主语,从句没有先行词依托,整个复合句不能成立。
再问: 也就是说who want to be good in such fields as music, art or sport不能单独作为主语从句当主语?他只是个定语从句?类似的问题,我好像问过,但是今天我又蒙圈了,拜托老师饿了
再答: 句子也能做主语,叫做主语从句,但是如果把 who want to be good in ...(谁希望擅长于...)用作主语从句,那么与后面的谓语部分 needs some talent 便风马牛不相及了。“谁希望擅长于诸如音乐、艺术或运动之类的领域(这种的事情)确实需要一些天才”是属于什么逻辑的语言呢!
1、such as 或 such…as 是固定搭配,不能讲 such like 或 such…like.可以修改如下:
* such fields as music, art or sport
* some fields like music, art or sport
2、those who want to be good in such fields as music, art or sport, really needs some talent(上面提到过的此处已经修正)中也有两处不妥:
* those 是复数主语.后面的动词不能用单三形式 needs;
* who want to be goodin such fields as music 是限制性定语从句,后面的逗号要去掉.
修改如下:
however, those who want to be good in such fields as music, art or sport really need some talent
再问: 那么可不可以去掉those直接用 who引导的从句作为主语从句need 为宾语)
再答: those 既是后面 need some talent 的主语,也是 who 引导的定语从句的先行词,句子没有主语,从句没有先行词依托,整个复合句不能成立。
再问: 也就是说who want to be good in such fields as music, art or sport不能单独作为主语从句当主语?他只是个定语从句?类似的问题,我好像问过,但是今天我又蒙圈了,拜托老师饿了
再答: 句子也能做主语,叫做主语从句,但是如果把 who want to be good in ...(谁希望擅长于...)用作主语从句,那么与后面的谓语部分 needs some talent 便风马牛不相及了。“谁希望擅长于诸如音乐、艺术或运动之类的领域(这种的事情)确实需要一些天才”是属于什么逻辑的语言呢!