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英语短文改错 有十处错误 我财富值不多了……全放出来了……帮帮忙吧……考试啊……Recently we have hol

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英语短文改错
有十处错误 我财富值不多了……全放出来了……帮帮忙吧……考试啊……
Recently we have hold a discussion over whether the young couples should stay with their parents and live on the income of their parents.They called “kenlaozu ” in Chinese.Each student express his opinion.As far as I am concern,it is wrong for the youngsters to live in this way.They should go out to work and try their best to make a living ourselves.Although they have fewer opportunity to find jobs and get high salaries,but they should at least find a proper job and try to support themselves instead staying at home.As matter of fact,their parents are becoming old and they should live happily and peaceful.It used to be very difficult to have brought their children up and they needn’t have responsibility to continue to support the youngsters
1. over---> about
2. and ---> or
3. express---> expresses
4. am concern---> concern
5. ourselves---> themselves
6. opportunity--->opportunties
7. but--->去掉
8. instead--->instead of
9. matter---> a matter
10. peaceful--->peacefully