求高手帮我写这篇雅思作文,不要运用过于难的单词.250字左右.24号前有效..

求高手帮我写这篇雅思作文,不要运用过于难的单词.250字左右.24号前有效..
Some children in rural places cannot have good schools and medical facilities.To improve this situation,some people suggest that new teachers and doctors should be sent to rural places for several years.Others,however,believe every one has the free right to choose where to work.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Should New Teachers and Doctors Be Sent to Rural Places?
Undoubtedly,more emphasis has been placed on the city development,and as a result,people there are living a happy life.They enjoy good schools and medical facilities.Their children can go to key colleges and even go overseas for further education.Hower,in rural areas,especially in some mountain villages,the situation is quite different.People there live a poor life.They cannot have good education and can not have good treatment when they are ill.Many children and teenagers are out of school.Many people die because of the poor medical conditions.
Different people hold different atittudes towards the problem.Some suggest that new teachers and doctors should be sent to rural places for several years.Others,however,believe every one has the free right to choose where to work.
In my humble opinion,I agree that new teachers and doctors should be encouraged to work in the rural places so as to improve the bad situation in the rural places.The reasons are as follow.The teachers and doctors can help the people out.They can help train more good teachers and doctors,increasing the teaching quality.The children there can be well educated and the patients can have good treatment.
Hower,to encourage the teachers and doctors to work in the rural places is one thing,but how to do it is another.Generally speaking,teachers are not willing to work in rural places,neither are doctors.So,some effective measurs are needed,one of which is that our government should pay great attention to it.Teachers and doctors should be offered a high salary and working condition.
People,wherever they come from,are all Chinese.They certainly have the same rights to share the same good schools and medical facilities.