一个人的成长是一个比较复杂的过程，其个性的形成和发展受诸多因素的影响，比如：家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、伟人、名人等。

One possible version:
Tracking My Growth
The process of growing up is complex for every person, for there are many influential factors in a person’s
growth as well as the development of his personality. As for me, what has affected me most in my both growth and personality are my family and friends, the two equally important factors.
After one is born, family is the very place in which he will grow up. A family plays a significant role in shaping children’s character because it’s children’s most valuable source of knowledge and experiences. Those who are brought up in good families tend to possess many pleasant characters and vice versa.
On the other hand, friends in some ways influence him more rapidly than families do. Friends have many different opinions and personalities. Discussing with them builds up his personality. Frankly speaking, I get lots of valuable things from my friends.
Family offers me warmth and care. Friends give me strength and horizons. Therefore, both of them are most influential in my growth,.

试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，陈述了对你的成长起着很大影响的家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、伟人、名人等诸多因素两个或三个；且谈谈你的看法和理由。
【亮点说明】
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