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这是一份我幼师应聘时我要用的英语自我介绍,请大家看看有什么语法错误.

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这是一份我幼师应聘时我要用的英语自我介绍,请大家看看有什么语法错误.
Respected teacher:
My name is Shu Shan,you can call me Susan also.Because I like the children's laughter,so I choose this occupation.There have been internship experience,I was paised have a childlike heart、love、faith and frank meeting parents .I am cheerful、warm、generous and clever .There have been teaching experience,but also have many deficiencies.I look forward to your kindergarten can let me learn more and better teaching experience.I know the preschool education this road is not easy.Now that I like,choose,we must stick to it and do well try our best.If the teacher give me a chance,I will work harder and put my potential.
你最好找个人给你修改一下,因为错的好像还不是一个,两个的地方.
本来想帮你改一下,但需要改动的地方太多.叫别人当面给你改更好点.