作业帮请将下面的英文修改一下,润色,改得好再加分.（急!） 2天内回复再加20分
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请将下面的英文修改一下,润色,改得好再加分.（急!） 2天内回复再加20分
可将修改好的直接打在下面,可以适量的增句删句,或者将我的话换成另一种说法.
加一些好词好句进里面
Some weeks ago,I had some 争执 with my mother.Because I think she is very boresome ,she always ask me to work hard and do a lot of homework,but I am so tired and I want to have a rest to play computer games.And she took care of me any time,she took care of me just like take care of a child.But I think I have grown up and I have ability to protect myself.I have been a man.She should let me alone.
Now,I adjust my attitude toward my mother.
On this Saturday,my mother went to work for a whole day.It means I must stay in the house alone for twelve hours.First I felt happy,I can enjoy the day without mother’s chatter.However when it’s time to have lunch ,I felt 困扰.I can’t cook meal.I just ate some biscuits as my lunch.At that time,I really know my mother’s meals are delicious and I haven’t been away from my mother yet.I know my mother’s chatters are beneficial for me.I know my mother is really loving me too.Mothers are the most important person for us.Mother is the best person in the world.
可将修改好的直接打在下面,可以适量的增句删句,或者将我的话换成另一种说法.
加一些好词好句进里面
Some weeks ago,I had some 争执 with my mother.Because I think she is very boresome ,she always ask me to work hard and do a lot of homework,but I am so tired and I want to have a rest to play computer games.And she took care of me any time,she took care of me just like take care of a child.But I think I have grown up and I have ability to protect myself.I have been a man.She should let me alone.
Now,I adjust my attitude toward my mother.
On this Saturday,my mother went to work for a whole day.It means I must stay in the house alone for twelve hours.First I felt happy,I can enjoy the day without mother’s chatter.However when it’s time to have lunch ,I felt 困扰.I can’t cook meal.I just ate some biscuits as my lunch.At that time,I really know my mother’s meals are delicious and I haven’t been away from my mother yet.I know my mother’s chatters are beneficial for me.I know my mother is really loving me too.Mothers are the most important person for us.Mother is the best person in the world.
Some weeks ago,I had some quarrel with my mother.Because I think she is very boresome ,she always ask me to work hard and do a lot of homework without the slightest consideration how tired I am or what I want to do.I'm a teenage,but not a machine.I need to relax myself after a whole day studying at school,and I think playing computer games is a good way to refresh myself.Besides,My mother takes care of me at all times,the way she treats me just like a little baby in mother's hands.However,I think I have grown up and have the ability to protect and care of myself.I eager my mother could give me the room of freedom and let me make the arrangement of my daily life.
However,one thing happened several days ago changed my attitude toward my mother.
On this Saturday,my mother went to work for a whole day.It means I must stay at home alone for twelve hours.I felt very happy at first time,I thought I can enjoy the day without mother’s chatter.But,when it’s time to have lunch ,I felt anxious for I don't know how to cook.I had to eat some biscuits for my lunch.At that time,I realized the importance of my mother to me and how dilicious of the meals she cook.I am still a child and cannot be independent from my mother.At the same time,I understand all my mother does for me is for my sake (意思是：我妈妈做的一切都是为了我好.I know she love me heartfully.Mum,I love you too,I'm sorry for my misunderstanding of you before.
However,one thing happened several days ago changed my attitude toward my mother.
On this Saturday,my mother went to work for a whole day.It means I must stay at home alone for twelve hours.I felt very happy at first time,I thought I can enjoy the day without mother’s chatter.But,when it’s time to have lunch ,I felt anxious for I don't know how to cook.I had to eat some biscuits for my lunch.At that time,I realized the importance of my mother to me and how dilicious of the meals she cook.I am still a child and cannot be independent from my mother.At the same time,I understand all my mother does for me is for my sake (意思是：我妈妈做的一切都是为了我好.I know she love me heartfully.Mum,I love you too,I'm sorry for my misunderstanding of you before.