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英语短文改错,when i was a children ,l lived in a mountain village

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英语短文改错,
when i was a children ,l lived in a mountain village ,there was no hospital ,when villagers are ill ,they couldn't see a doctor.ifthey were not badly ill,they had just stayed at home.if they were badly ill,they had to go to the town see a doctor.but is was very,very difficult for it.so some villagers died bacause this.from then on,l made up my mind to help them.
l think i should be a doctor.if i study hardly,i can study medicine,i will return back to the poor area after finished my studies.i can help the sicker villagers.
so what is my dream?To be a doctor
都说了这是改错的,至少有10个地方是错的。当然有些可能是我打错的问题,希望大家体谅下
When "I" was a children ," I" lived in a mountain village ,there was no hospital ,when villagers are ill,_they couldn't see a doctor.if they were not badly ill,they had just stayed at home.if they were badly ill,they had to go to the town "to" see a doctor.but is was very,very difficult "to do" it.so some villagers died because this.from "now" on,l made up my mind to help them.
l think i should be a doctor.if i study hardly,_"I" can study medicine,"after finished my studies",_"I" will return back to the poor area ."I" can help the sicker villagers.
What is my dream?To be a "good" doctor.