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请教英语作文1 .according to the survey ,an increasing number of pe

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请教英语作文
1 .according to the survey ,an increasing number of people are beginning to realize technology does not end with social .2.the advanced technology will make it possible for human beings to land on Mars .3.everybody will have a videophone ,people will have no difficult in communicating .
4 .when it comes to videophone ,it's good for children to learn knowledge .5 .what's better ,many experts point out that the robot helps us to do homework .6 .i think it' s good for us .
麻烦好心人改下,并给个分,给个分(满分二十五),注:并说明该作文水平属高中还是大学的?
1 .number of people who are beginning .
3.everybody will have a videophone ,people will have no difficultty in communicating .
18分,基本语句还算通顺,但是逻辑没有条理