冰雪奇缘英语小学作文,单词要简单,

冰雪奇缘英语小学作文,单词要简单,

In this winter I watched a film which was called Frozen.It is about two girls called Elsa and Anna.They were very closed when they are young.One day Elsa hurt Anna with her power carelessly.Then Elsa start to scare her power,and not to touch anybody including Anna.Because of the film I learn two things .First,love is important to everyone,for it can make us strong.Second,confidence can make everything come true.I think if you have confidance you will make miracle,just like Anna,she has her confidance to find Elsa and at last she dose do so.
只能写这么多了
再问： 你复制的
再答： 改了一些错误的语法，你可以比一下
再问： 可对我来收太难了，我才3年级诶
再答： 那你就把高级语法全去了，直接提主干啊
再问： 你能不能帮我去一些？
再答： In this winter ，I watched a film ，it called Frozen.It is about two girls--Elsa and Anna. They were very closed when they are young.One day, Elsa hurt Anna with her power carelessly. Then Elsa was scared,and not to touch anyone including Anna.From the film, I learn two things .First, love is important to everyone,for it can make us strong. Second, confidence can make miracle，just like Anna， she was confidant to find Elsa and at last she made it.

过去式不知道你们有没有学，如果没有或者不满意我可以再改
再问： 这个结构太复杂了。还有一些单词我不会
再答： 如果你是要一句一句的，没有衔接的那种，可以自己改啊。
我还有个办法，因为你们学的比较简单，可以直接百度【百度翻译】，然后直接写中文，在线翻译一下就OK了